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you never knew

you never knew about
my first step and you never
knew my first word.
she never told you...
guess she thought you knew
you never knew about
my first bike, and my first
year of school. you never
knew about the baby girl
who belongs to you.
you never saw my first A
or my first bone break.
you weren't there to wipe
the tears at my first heart break. she left you without
telling you about your baby
girl, the one, til now, who
never knew about you.
now i'm searching and hoping
too. wishing everyday to meet
the man i never knew, to see
him and to say:"Hello dad, i'm
your little girl... i know
that this seems strange...
but i just wanted to say ...
I've always dreamt of you..."

by KabrieloftheFallen
posted on 02/07/2008

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Comment by Poison: Feb 7, 2008 12:06 pm
i like it..Very good.
Comment by cryingblackblood: Feb 7, 2008 12:12 pm
awe i hope you find your dadSmiley
Comment by Mangekyo: Feb 7, 2008 12:20 pm
i hope and wish u happiness always.... now and forever......keep up the great work......
Comment by DeadMoonChild: Feb 7, 2008 12:36 pm
I love the deep feeling but hope for the best for you.
Comment by tobeloved: Feb 7, 2008 4:29 pm
Aww.. i hope you find your dad!

Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 11, 2008 12:12 pm
me too. good poem.
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 15, 2008 1:12 am
dont take this the wrong way... but sometimes its better not find someone you never knew because what they might be could crush your world.. there are always reasons why parents aren't around.. if you do find your dad, dont have high expectations.. it will save you alot of hurt
Comment by cooper: Mar 7, 2008 6:05 am
oh honey! thats a really good poem, such good work.

i had my dad there for quite a few years and honey, i wished he was never there. he always lived with us but never did things with us, i dont know him. there are heaps of ways in not knowing people even if they are in your life.

good luck girl
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