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What Happens?

What happens after death?
is there a heaven or hell?
then how can I be sure that he goes to hell?
for everything he's done
and everything he's taken
from her.
close your eyes darling.
it'll be okay.
talk to me, talk to me.
did he hurt you?
oh no, the bruises say it all.
mentally affected too.
she shakes when we hold her close.
even under the heaviest of blankets.
how can I help?
she's lost and alone.
she's drifting away, and there's nothing I can do.
nothing i can say.
to make this pain.
go.
away.

by soccerkeeper21
posted on 06/22/2007

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Comment by lookinfortherightgal: Jun 22, 2007 7:12 am
wow..thats not what i expected its really good..nice one!
Comment by soccerkeeper21: Jun 22, 2007 7:14 am
uuh thanks? lol thank you
Comment by TheEmoFreak: Jun 22, 2007 8:26 am
wow! great job. this isnt about, u no, is it?
Comment by spiritwithin: Jun 22, 2007 8:54 am
Yes sad and you have gotten the reader involved bringing them through each part of your poem. Well done.
Comment by soccerkeeper21: Jun 23, 2007 7:39 pm
no it isnt about me. i have some friends though, and it hurts to watch them hurt.
Comment by distantlove: Jun 23, 2007 10:37 pm
this is really good.
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