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Waiting...

Pain doesn't hurt when
It's all you've ever felt
When you've lost the light
And there's no one to help

When you get lost in memories
So dark that you can't see
Wandering a lonely path
For whom you're meant to be

Stuck inside a world you hate
And your life has come undone
But you keep walking on alone
Because you're waiting for someone

To come and bring the light
All the colors of the world
Waiting for the one to come
Whose heart your're meant to hold

by Snoman
posted on 05/10/2008

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Comment by kayla: May 10, 2008 1:44 am
Really great poemSmiley One to relate to. Nice rhyme and flow.
Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 10, 2008 8:02 am
amazing. i love it. great job
Comment by clinxi: May 11, 2008 5:26 am
love it love it love lol ohh and didnt think u would like my poem as i open my eyes so much lol
Comment by broken3heart3: May 11, 2008 9:16 am
that was completly beautiful... so much meaning into every sentence... so so pretty... damn i can't think of anything else to say... luv3 it tho <33333333
Comment by zoe: May 11, 2008 1:50 pm
WOW....That was great wish i was that good!!!!!
~*SMILE*~
Comment by karam3langel92: May 12, 2008 5:59 am
Great poem it has alot of meaning to it!=)
Comment by Darryn732: May 12, 2008 10:57 am
Great Poem
Comment by crazyLILthingcalledLoVe: May 12, 2008 5:19 pm
oOo I like it a lot!!!!
IS this the one that you were talking to me about?
U know w/ the dream N everything.....Anywayz great job!!!
Smiley
Comment by Snoman: May 13, 2008 9:23 pm
yeah i think so... i 4get lol i write a lot when i dream odd as it sounds... i wrote an entire poem in my sleep lol Sticking tongue out i think it was my poem "the voices" yeah that's the one thats the one... in my dream people thought i was crazy so i wrote this and ran away or something... and then i woke up on the floor next to my desk... and i had written it... kinda odd but i got used to it lol Sticking tongue out
i think i've written like 4 or 5 but that's the only one that was any good i think... actually i had written another and i was going to post it... but i changed my mind cause that one made me sound really crazy... something like...

I'll never yield
and i'll never rest
you could tear the
heart from my chest
inside my soul
beneath my skin
I, i can't contain
the demon within


yeah that's how it went...
kinda scary lol
even more so i think that i can remember it...
whatever...
this is too long of a comment for my own poem...
kinda dumb really...
im done...
but before i go...

Diane Warren is the BEST!!!

GOOGLE HER!!!

OMG!!!

BEST WRITER IN THE WHOLE WORLD
Comment by fadingXmemory: May 14, 2008 12:44 pm
dude that a really good poem.^^
Comment by Penny: May 19, 2008 7:51 pm
wow chris thats a really good poem Smiley)
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