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Vanished

All my hopes, dreams and wishes are gone.
Vanishing with the blood in my veins.
Slowly the blackness comes,
creeping in from the corner of my eyes.
As the loss of life puddles on the floor.
Washed down the drain with...
Every wish I ever made.
Every dream I ever conjured.
Every hope I dared believe.

The sweet blackness claims.
At last I feel no more.
No need for foolish hopes.
Or those silly dreams.
Or even my whispered wishes.
I am finally gone...
My one true wish granted.
My final dream come true.
My last hope given life.

Yet how long do I have?
Wrapped in sweet blissful darkness.
Before they wrench from me
all that I have lived for.
And give life and breath to me once more.
As I am forced to return to the horror of reality.
With nothing but...
Hopes.
Dreams.
And wishes.

by BloodLustingElf
posted on 04/03/2008

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Comment by loveme77: Apr 3, 2008 2:57 pm
"As I am forced to return to the horror of reality."
Great job. I enjoyed it.
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Apr 3, 2008 3:09 pm
thanks
Comment by controlthedemon: Apr 3, 2008 4:35 pm
wow
im speechless
great choice of words, and fantastic flow
your a great writer
Smiley
Comment by shortcookie: Apr 4, 2008 7:14 am
Great poem, well writen, flows nicely and has lots of feeling =]
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 4, 2008 8:00 am
See i told you that your poems were good BS. this is really really good Smiley
Comment by truckergirl14: Apr 4, 2008 12:59 pm
i am inlove with this poem i had to put it on mine i told everyone i did not write it this is real cood keep it up
Comment by truckergirl14: Apr 4, 2008 12:59 pm
i am inlove with this poem i had to put it on mine i told everyone i did not write it this is real cood keep it up
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