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Untitled 4/24/08

I'm so thrilled I get the opportunity
To watch the back of another person
Metaphorically walk away
While I'm left alone and confused,
Literally lost in my own headspace,
And feel the painful pangs of doubt,
Figuratively stabbing at my heart.

by SisterofDarkness
posted on 04/24/2008

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Comment by moonlightmage: Apr 28, 2008 1:07 pm
...wow. *shudder* *shudder* *twitch* *twitch*

ahem

IM NOT WALKING AWAY EITHER! ooooh look! A butterfly! *walks away*
haha. JUST KIDDING! iluvm my dearest Beccah. <333
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Apr 24, 2008 8:35 pm
In case you can't tell, the first line is actually sarcastic.
Comment by patrea: Apr 24, 2008 11:06 pm
good words
Comment by patrea: Apr 24, 2008 11:06 pm
actually!! ;)
Comment by tearsofrain: Apr 25, 2008 12:33 pm
but you know what?
i'm not walking away.
i don't care why kyle has to say.
i don't care about jason's penis preferences.
i don't care about morgans issues.

i love you. straight up. and i think you will find your way, even if it drives you insane first.
even if you went crazy, i would still love you. i will love you no matter who decides they think they're better than you. because no one person is better than another.
so there. there's my motivational speech for the day.
though. there may be more. be forwarned lovely.
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Apr 25, 2008 2:18 pm
OMG JESSI I LOVE IT WHEN YOU COMMENT CUZ YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME FEEL BETTER!!!! I love you JEssi!!!
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Apr 25, 2008 2:19 pm
and also I love how you can list all the people that could possibly have been in my head when I wrote this. JESSI IS BY FAR VERY AMAZING!!!
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Apr 25, 2008 4:08 pm
I also enjoyed the phrase, 'Jason's penis preferences.' that's a good one lovely.
Comment by undefinedlove: Apr 25, 2008 7:27 pm
... wow.
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Apr 25, 2008 7:31 pm
umm yeah jessi i dont think this has anything to do with my "penis preferences" and further more id appreciate it if you youd leave me the fuck out of everything you fuckin have to say...

all you seem to say is fucking bullshit

stop talking about me. dont mention me, dont even think of me...mention it somewhere so its not so obvious. your a fuckin joke. Im sick of it

not in the mood to deal with your shit. i have enough of it.

sorry beccah if this taints your comments but jessi should know her fucking place. dont talk about me. ever.
Comment by undefinedlove: Apr 25, 2008 7:31 pm
... wow.
Comment by Atwood: Apr 26, 2008 7:53 am
puh.
that's cool.
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Apr 28, 2008 7:48 am
Okay...I don't want my poems to be a battle ground guys, so just please cut the drama! Jason, Jessi does have a right to say what she wants...she actually made me laugh so please...and yeah...sorry don't want any drama unless it's actually talking about my POEM you dunce love you all.
Comment by tearsofrain: Apr 28, 2008 1:12 pm
if you actaully read my comment
you might realize it isn't even about you.
its about my love for beccah, not my obessesion with you (and invented obsession that doesn't exist)
i know its hard for you to grasp, because its hard for everyone to grasp.
but jason, its not always all about you.
Comment by undefinedlove: Apr 28, 2008 5:13 pm
jessi, i think he is just upset that you said that about him. but. anyways.
beccahhh you write lovely poetry. and it's not fair. T.T
just wondering, an innocent question... i know people have a right to say what they want... but where do you draw the line? because some stuff really hurts.
just wondering, once again. not starting anything. i just want to know where people stand. message me mehbeh?
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