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Magma from the volcano moving slowly down the lane.
Inhabiting the suburban streets, driving citizens insane.
Slow burning fire driving Americans to a scare.
Infecting the city streets until the concrete starts to tear.
But then its the architects fault, cracks were left in the walls.
The foundation wasn't good, at any second it could fall.
And then the beast should be kept in a cave, away from it all.
Just give it a mirror, it'll stay entertained by its vanity with it's handsome teeth and sharp claws..

by Verasailles
posted on 04/23/2008

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Comment by tearsofrain: Apr 24, 2008 5:51 am
interesting...

haha isn't that like the lamest thing you can say?

that's... interesting.
but it really is.
its one of those poems you really can think about.
the last line is a lot longer than the others, but i understand why. you can't really just say "handsome teeth" cause then it'll sound emo/unfinished, but you can't just say sharp claws either cause then it wont rhyme.


symolism a lot though, right?
Comment by nickson104: Apr 24, 2008 1:51 pm
umm i see it quite random Smiley its still a good poem though Smiley
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