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Defenseless

you built me up
and then you broke me down
you built me up
and then you tore me apart
you destroyed all my defences
i am infuriated by your very presence
battered and broken
bruised and betrayed
all my dreams have been chrushed
all my hopes have been trashed
my secrets have been revealed
and my deepest fears are real
you built me up
and then you broke me down
you built me up
and then you tore me apart
you destroyed all my defences
i am infuriated by your very presence
hands raise against me to strike
voices swell to push me back
evil faces sneer from the shadows
my only hope is to give in to you
but i will not
you built me up
and then you broke me down
you built me up
and then you tore me apart
you destroyed all my defences
i am infuriated by your very presence

by LostInside
posted on 03/31/2009

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Comment by nightsky211: Mar 31, 2009 6:28 am
nice
Comment by miusha: Mar 31, 2009 9:10 am
sounds like a song that i would hear when i have been let down by the one person i love. love it!
Comment by LostInside: Apr 1, 2009 3:52 pm
thats what its supposed to sound like
Ya!!
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