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i needed to trust u
that u wouldnt lie
so i could escape from a world
where all i did was cry.

u tugged me along
to a quiet place
where no one could find us
reality we neednt face.

"a lil peice of paradise,
nothing but happiness we'd feel"
a place away from everything
no problems in which to deal.

in ur arms forever
i said i wanted to stay
disapeare from everyone
from the real world, run away.

but suddenly u changed
a girl can always tell
when a relationship goes sour
when she reaches hell.

cheating on me
guess it was just fate
but let me tell u boy
u threw me into a state.

saying that u loved me
u stole away my heart
then sneaking around with her
you ripped it apart.

i pretty much self-destructed
when i found out about ur slut
i was raced back to reality
and there i began to cut.

i had nothing left
since my love u had stole
and having no will power
the habbit took control.

boy lets get this straight
theres no need to pretend
u knew who she was
u dont sleep with ur girls best friend.

now im in intensive care
just barley hanging on
u hurt me for the last time
because by morning ill be gone.

~ yeah i dont like the last stanza so much... any suggestions?

by darkartisticgurl
posted on 12/16/2007

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Comment by punkprincess: Dec 16, 2007 12:10 pm
thats an amazing poem!! i love it.
thats sad what he did... but it was probably not meant to be...
im sorry that happend.

i like the last stanza...
its great. Smiley
Comment by MysticFog: Dec 16, 2007 4:32 pm
Wow. I really. really. really. love this poem. I'll try to come up with the last stanza later though i love it the way it is. Amazing poem!!!!
Comment by Danielleybelley: Dec 23, 2007 8:49 pm
LOVE IT! <33333 I really like the last stanza! don't change a thing! Smiley
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