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untitled(yet again!)

Crying
Endlessly
Every night
Can't seem
To get through
To you
On the verge
Of insanity
If only I
Could make
You see
What all
This shit
Is doing
To me

by TheEmoFreak
posted on 11/13/2007

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Comment by kayla: Nov 13, 2007 2:28 pm
Well put together little poem, I struggle with titles to alot to. Love and peaceSmiley
Comment by floating: Nov 13, 2007 2:51 pm
The problem is allowing others the power to have such profound affects on us.

A little detachment wouldn't be a bad thing....and then attach as and when you wish....and detach when you must.

Experience and discipline. Not always easy to do, but worth working on and toward.

Sure saves on crying jags and misery!
Comment by funkyninja898: Nov 13, 2007 3:10 pm
nice poem, i also hate titles, i can't seem to think of good ones. i'm sorry this person doesn't see what they're doing to you. just hang in there.
Comment by HeckYes: Nov 13, 2007 4:40 pm
I like this poem, I can relate. Yeah, titles aren't my thing either.. lol. But anyway, really good poem here. Keep up the good work!
Comment by kitten546: Nov 13, 2007 4:58 pm
i like it but it sucks that this person cant see ur in so much pain i hope itll get better soon!!
Comment by trapped: Nov 14, 2007 12:05 pm
..im the same way right now.
good poem!
Comment by oliviaisahorridpoet: Nov 19, 2007 10:33 am
It's really choppy, and maybe that's how you meant to convey this because you're upset.
It's sweet and simple.
Smiley
And a lot of the time, a poem doesn't need a title.
Comment by Tequilla: Dec 12, 2007 8:06 am
Short but good...could say a lot in just a few words
Comment by MysticFog: Dec 22, 2007 6:10 pm
wow great poem
Comment by YourmyChemical: Jan 31, 2008 3:07 pm
aww i hope your okayy.
[if its personal]
it was over all amazing tho
Comment by soccerkeeper21: Mar 9, 2008 7:33 am
everything you write is so relatable and real.

we need to talk again, because i miss it. :/
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