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Until I Became A Dad

God sent me a bundle of joy
a little tiny baby boy
to hold in my arms really tight
to watch as he falls asleep at night
to change my life more than before
to be mine forever and more
his little fingers i held in my hand
now true love i really understand
but on night he stopped breathing
and his tiny heart quit beating
god took him away from me
i guess things werent meant to be
nothing left to remember him by
he was just to young to die
people say they know how i feel
but this pain is just so unreal
i never knew anything hurt so bad
until i became a dad!

by BloodyRainbow
posted on 11/11/2009

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Comment by hardwiredflaws: Nov 11, 2009 11:35 pm
oh so sad!
You conveyed emotion in this writing really well.
Comment by Throwinguprainbo: Nov 11, 2009 10:01 am
This is so touching!! I love it so much! It made me cry! <3 I want a baby like that one day
Comment by BrokenSmile831: Nov 12, 2009 8:19 am
how could you say that you want a baby like that one day??
dakota is my best friend!
you apparently didnt really read his poem,
its about his baby dying!!!!
what is wrong with you???
he wrote this poem about how he never really felt pain
until his son died
and you're gonna set there and tell him
that you hope you have a baby like that one day,
thats wrong, thats a wrong thing for you to want.


i love you dakota,
im sorry for your loss
beautiful poem.
i miss kayden to tho.
Comment by cupcake: Nov 12, 2009 2:05 pm
i love this
and you never can really understand ones pain until something similar happens
very good expression of emotionm
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 12, 2009 4:49 pm
oh my god this is so beautiful
and then so sad
and im so sorry
but i love this poem.
Comment by ZackeryDaley: Nov 12, 2009 7:08 pm
pussy.
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