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Understand me

People say you can't
Die from a broken heart
I knew that was a lie
Since the very start
I'm dark and demented
You tell me to smile
I'd might if someone cared
Every once in a while
No one can see that I'm
drowning in sorrow
Tears I choke back
And words I swallow
I'm bleeding on the inside
And crying on the out
Can't you at least try
To understand what I'm about?
To understand how I feel?
To understand why I cry?
To understand that
I wanna give up and die?
That's never gonna happen
Because nothing gets to you
You'll never try to care
So I guess I'm through

by VengefulBroxy
posted on 07/19/2007

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Comment by tearsofrain: Jan 20, 2008 1:53 pm
this is a good poem.
quite honestly, i was surprised it was one o teh most commented ones though. its true that its relatable, but there's nothing too special about it. in fact, i totally lost concentration towards the end.
there is feeling in your words, and it rhymes, but... thats about it
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jul 19, 2007 8:32 am
omg
wow i felt tat, it's really sad
but a very good poem
vote up for this
Comment by TMacias: Jul 19, 2007 9:49 am
This is extremely well written. It is something we all feel and experience at one point or another in our lives. For some the feeling comes and goes with loves that pass through. Just remember that you are loved by the most important person ... GOD... and that with time... these feelings will decimate. You are awesome, even if people lack to say it... you are important and vital to the world, if not GOD wouldn't of chosen you to create. He took his time to create you to perfection... you are loved... you are wanted... hopefully soon things will become clear. Awesome poem with lots of emotion.
Comment by cjfin00: Jul 19, 2007 10:33 am
Good poem. I liked it very much. Sometimes I feel exactly the same way.

Never give up. You have a talent that I wish I had. Keep writing, it is a great way to release these emotions.

I can only give you two thumbs up....well, cause that's all I have.
Comment by poorlacrymosa: Jul 19, 2007 11:12 am
That is a really great poem. You're amazing.
Comment by saveme: Jul 19, 2007 5:52 pm
i really felt this one it was so deep...
Comment by Jenifer5: Jul 19, 2007 6:34 pm
I like it.
Comment by haydenwyker: Jul 19, 2007 6:39 pm
Oh My. Its ok celsea i care. allot. Im so sorry for not talking with you for so long. I really am. Hopefully we can talk soon..

Bye. ♥ Hayden.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Jul 19, 2007 8:17 pm
Wow this is deep
I am at a lost of words
It has a lot of feeling I really like it
And thats true although you may still be breathing and walking and waking everyday
Its like you are surviving without a heart and you are truly lost because of the pain the one you loved caused
So I know a broken heart may not kill you pshyically but it does mentally and emotionally
This is a very good poem
Take care, stay strong and keep writing
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jul 20, 2007 3:16 am
Very deep. Well written.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jul 20, 2007 7:40 am
i like that one.
Comment by mzbrowneyez: Jul 20, 2007 8:11 am
I felt that one...nice
Comment by bloodstainedlove: Jul 20, 2007 12:17 pm
oh.. wow.. i felt so much anger and sorrow coming from that. i absolutly love this poem it hold so much meaning and truth
Comment by stitchgrin: Jul 20, 2007 1:16 pm
wow thats great!! keep it up!!
Comment by TifneyS67: Jul 20, 2007 7:54 pm
I feel ya!!! Wow are you me haha
Comment by InMyDreams: Jul 20, 2007 9:28 pm
amazingly and perfectly written..
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Jul 22, 2007 8:09 am
a lot of people care about you, people you dont even know. i know EXACTLY how you feel... ive been through so much stuff in my life. i really hate it. this just.... i dont know... it made me feel... its undescribable... if you have ever read this book youll understand this its like "i more or less curled up into a ball and let the misery have me." i do that often.. its like ive given up on everything because i believe no one cares what they do to me... breathtaking poem i love it so much. if you could favorite poems on this website, so that you could just read them by clicking the link on your page, i would DEFINATELY favorite this one.. awesome job. id like to talk to you more and im going to read more of your poems now. awesome work, youve got my vote up
Comment by mzbrowneyez: Jul 23, 2007 10:19 am
Alot of people feel the same way but never know how to express it and thats why I feel so many end up harming themselves so its good to always let your emotions out..great poem
Comment by darkheart27: Jul 23, 2007 10:47 am
this poem is very easy to relate, and it's so well and beautifully written. many people feel this way(including me). But know that even though you don't think anyone cares about you, I know one person who does: God. talk to him for a while. it'll help
And great poem
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Jul 23, 2007 3:54 pm
people like to be stupid...sometimes people care more quiet then others..

well written i liked it
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jul 24, 2007 3:33 am
O i forgot to tell you something when i left the 1st comment
someone cares, there is someone who cares
Comment by KillerBlueEyes: Jul 25, 2007 1:33 pm
i love it, its beautiful
Comment by heatherprice: Jul 26, 2007 3:16 pm
very awsome poem as everyone already said
Comment by PoetProdigy: Jul 29, 2007 4:16 am
deep beautifull poem, keep it up Smiley
Comment by missingmom: Jul 30, 2007 7:00 am
Really good poem! I've got a lot of people who say they love me and yet there's so many times that I feel so misunderstood and that know one really cares! Good job on this poem. Smiley
Comment by Blazen: Aug 22, 2007 4:37 am
really good poem ive been there before. i think its hard for people to understand
Comment by loveseekerhatefinder: Aug 29, 2007 4:40 pm
i felt every word in that poem. that was great.
Comment by soul2soul: Aug 30, 2007 12:51 pm
Excellent poem...
Comment by chazie: Sep 19, 2007 12:27 pm
beautiful!!
Comment by UrDReaMsArEmYNiGhtMaREs: Sep 25, 2007 8:13 am
i like this
Comment by kilove: Sep 28, 2007 2:37 pm
wow very good poem//dont ever give up keep trying and writing//the one you least expect to care-cares
Comment by FallinToTheDark: Oct 11, 2007 2:09 pm
iMpReSiVE
Comment by Lostsouls07: Nov 8, 2007 9:19 am
wel I think dis poem is really good and its like dis there is no words 2 describe it me if u ask me
Comment by mysterianne': Dec 8, 2007 3:19 am
i believe we all face the dark nights of our souls, for some reason,some more than others....i feel this..i vote up
Comment by loveme77: Dec 16, 2007 6:09 pm
Very deep and passionate. I loved this poem and I'm sure everybody else does. Well done!
Comment by MisGoo: Jan 2, 2008 5:39 pm
this is how i feel right now..
Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 7, 2008 10:41 pm
Well there isnt anything to say that hasnt been said already, so just great job, wonderful poem, keep it up
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 10, 2008 7:40 am
wow...amazing poem. i mean i really love it. i feel this way all of the time. you are an amazing writer! people do care i guess...i mean people you know. i'm gonna read more of your poems!
Comment by tobeloved: Jan 19, 2008 1:51 pm
good poem, i really liked it. great job.. voting upSmiley
Comment by Reece: Jan 20, 2008 12:22 am
MY god this is amazing, So much emotion in one poem seems impossible!! good work!
Comment by CrimsonRain: May 25, 2008 7:47 pm
this is the best poem i have ever read
Thank you for writing such a masterpiece
Comment by Troxden: Feb 2, 2008 8:13 am
i care, and if ever you need something, i'll try to understand.
Comment by echodelta112: Feb 13, 2008 5:32 pm
Wow... i felt every emotion expressed in your poem. I understand how you feel.. i'm going through the same thing.
Comment by babyboogt82886: Feb 19, 2008 9:46 am
wow awesome poem...i often times feel that way as well! great work! Smiley
Comment by asimpledeath: Mar 4, 2008 9:49 am
That was such a good poem. I can say that i can relate to this poem.
Comment by RUBY187: Mar 9, 2008 1:57 pm
i loved this poem, it was something that i can totally relate to
Comment by deathmonkey: Mar 16, 2008 11:05 am
I have a feeling everybody - here at least - can relate exactly to what you're saying
Comment by aluv: Apr 29, 2008 9:45 pm
WoW. It really did touch me and i felt for a moment how you must have felt when writing it. Good no great job.
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 26, 2008 10:28 pm
amazing, i love it. i know exactly what you mean.
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