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Today

Today I saw
What I cannot have.

I'm sorry.

Yesterday I dreamt
Of tiny hands,
Aiding steps and
Teaching words.

Tomorrow I will cry,
And we will fight
Until you hold me,
And still the pain
That flows unseen.

Insufferably I seem
To act like a stone,
But your gentle heart
Won't let me suffer alone.

You say give up this bottle
Cos it won't see me through,
And if I have nothing left,
Then I'll still have you.

by beautifuldisaster
posted on 10/30/2009

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Comment by dstalk: Nov 1, 2009 1:03 am
Love it!
Comment by 0oAngelo0: Oct 31, 2009 7:01 pm
beautiful poem.

I too am glad your not alone through this. keep strong.

=)
Comment by 0oAngelo0: Oct 31, 2009 6:58 pm
beautiful poem.

I too am glad your not alone through this. keep strong.

=)
Comment by wishingitwasyou: Nov 19, 2009 4:49 pm
My fave poem on here so far.
Comment by charlotte897: Nov 19, 2009 5:19 am
aww thats so sweet
Comment by Atavist: Nov 19, 2009 4:39 am
Indescribably articulate and so delicately fragile with hurt, that I almost felt it deserved a flood of tears in honest validation.Take the strength that you have been offered so you can regain your footing and display your own.
Comment by grunty: Oct 31, 2009 4:13 am
Yesterday I dreamt
Of tiny hands,
Aiding steps and
Teaching words.

Those lines are so beautiful.

This is a lovely little poem and I hope you are doing better.
Comment by Uncertain: Oct 31, 2009 6:35 am
This really is a beautiful poem, and I'm glad that you aren't going through this alone.

I don't think I can quote one separate stanza, the poem as a whole is amazing.

Stay strong
Comment by Dark: Oct 31, 2009 2:47 pm
I like it. nice poem. no gr8 poem!!!!!!!!!
Comment by mightymouse: Nov 1, 2009 8:21 pm
Don't lose hope! You gave me hope! so i'm gonna give some back!
Comment by SilentWords: Nov 2, 2009 3:18 pm
Yesterday I dreamt
Of tiny hands,
Aiding steps and
Teaching words.

That got to me..

This is a beautiful poem, its sad, yes, but it does show hope, wonderful!
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 2, 2009 4:11 pm
if i have nothing left...ill still have you
beautiful
Comment by Throughwithlove14: Nov 3, 2009 8:15 am
I abso-friggin-lutely love the last two lines. =]

Keep writing, its totally awsome=]
Comment by nina777: Nov 3, 2009 1:25 pm
this is beautiful ;=0
Comment by KillerBlueEyes: Nov 3, 2009 7:42 pm
beautiful, i really like the ending good poem
Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 4, 2009 5:50 pm
Grunty and Silent said everything I was thinking.
Comment by Telemachus: Nov 8, 2009 7:23 pm
Sadness and hope and self-awareness - well observed and nicely written.
Comment by ForbiddenLove: Nov 8, 2009 3:10 pm
This is a great poem it goes on nice and smooth with a good meaning to it
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 10, 2009 6:28 pm
Stone is not good, anything hard is brittle...it's best to bend under pressure a little. It hurts some, but it'll stop you snapping, sounds like you have someone to watch for cracks and patch them up.

(I really shouldn't mix up my metaphors...)
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