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The War Within


There is a war deep and within
Anger and hatred building with sin
I start to feel like I am confined
Can’t get out just trapped inside

And all that I want is to get out
Away from it all' sick of all doubt
I’ve lost it all & i cannot believe
So I irate and I also feel deceived

I still feel left out I feel the pain
So can I give it all up & be slain
All I that want is a chance to shine
I’m losing it all lord give me a sign








Sept 5th, 07
Cody Potter

by Loveformusicandpoetry1790
posted on 10/14/2009

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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 15, 2009 5:01 pm
JEEZ. Dark and rather depressing. Sorrowful and intense, yes, Amazing work!
Comment by darknessofcrows: Oct 22, 2009 10:18 pm
Very good.... though what is irate? Just curious, since you asked. Otherwise great.... votes up.
Comment by nina777: Oct 29, 2009 10:18 am
good
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