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The Rose

I feel empty, I'm dying inside
A withered Rose-
no longer filled with pride.

I'm no longer whole,
Wilted with time
I'm missing a part of me,
It's something I can't find

My laugh is hollow
My eyes are dim
Im filled with sorrow

My hope was gone
Im no longer a rose
vibrant and soft
I've been waiting for so long

My petals have fallen
Im left with only thorns

They pierce my world
and drain away my life

I'm not but a withered Rose,
faded with time.

by Angelsvoice
posted on 04/23/2008

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Comment by Alomentis: Apr 25, 2008 2:14 am
Very well written. Isn't that exactly how we all feel at times? great work.
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 23, 2008 10:39 am
wow...what an amazing poem...you expressed yourself well....
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 23, 2008 10:41 am
this is amazing
Comment by Cloudular: Apr 23, 2008 11:56 am
I love how you compared the life of a rose to a human emotion. Great job!
Comment by Catwoman772: May 1, 2008 10:55 am
oh i love this one.
i think ur really good at this! great poem and i know exactly how you feel
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 24, 2008 9:47 am
awww this is good i like it alot... keep it up your good at poetry i think i would even have to say its your thing lol!
Comment by kareohline012: Apr 23, 2008 2:40 pm
awesome poem. really nice job
Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 24, 2008 4:54 am
wow this is beautiful...
I love it because it says so much and is filled with emotion and detail
Greatly written
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Apr 24, 2008 5:36 am
totally agree.. absolutely amazing
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: Apr 24, 2008 4:33 pm
it so great.
keep it up (:
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: Apr 24, 2008 4:33 pm
**it's
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Apr 24, 2008 5:37 pm
wow this is wow i am speechless wow i am impressed this poem is very good you really expressed yourself. wow this is a very deep yet also very strong......
wwwwwwwooooooooooowwwwwwww
i...i.....i am like totally lost in words now....
Comment by cooper: Apr 26, 2008 6:53 am
just wanted to let you know that i really like this!!
Comment by theAwakening: Apr 26, 2008 9:18 pm
It's amazing, and I say it because this is human emotion at its rawest and most exposed. We all have a time when we feel as though there's nothing left but bad in our lives. But also, roses grow back every year, that's also how we are like a rose; we can return to a beautiful state of being. Very well written.
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Apr 28, 2008 6:37 pm
aww very amazing,soo detailed and true!
Comment by EmoPoetry: Apr 29, 2008 7:34 pm
I love roses.
Comment by bloodyrose: May 7, 2008 11:11 am
holy crow.....agree with theawaking..its simpley amazing
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