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The Riverbed.

I slowly walked down to the riverbed,
With the apparition of violence echoing in my head,
I gently placed my toe in the ice like water,
But removed it when I hear the cries of my daughter,
I ran to the house to find him leaning over my precious child,
With her blood on his hand and eyes so wild,
I reached out and tried to stop the mistreating,
But this only seemed to worsen the beating,

Once he was done he left us there,
Both of us sobbing with tears of despair,
My little girl of merely three years old,
Had to endure a rage that was uncontrolled,

There was only one-way to spare us the pain and the hurting,
From the man I man I married who was so disconcerting,
I bundled up my angel and snuck outside,
Careful not to be seen, careful to hide,
I once again slipped down to the riverbed,
And laid a gentle kiss on my angels head,

“Now you and I are going to go for a little swim”
I said with a tone that came out to grim,
My baby girl nodded and wrapped her arms around my waist,
I held her close to tighten the embrace,

I took a deep breath and stepped towards our escape,
And in my head images of freedom began to take shape,
The water was chilly and my girl let out cries,
And tears escaped from her baby blue eyes,

I dived under the water and waited till the escape was near,
And that was when I lost all conscious and all fear,
Now my child and I will have no more pain,
The feeling of desperation never experienced again,
Now we will be happy and now we will be free,
And living a life with just her and me.

by shirotora
posted on 02/04/2008

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Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Feb 4, 2008 3:43 am
That is so sad. Very good writing. Voting up.
Comment by aqua4ever: Feb 4, 2008 5:38 am
Thats kinnda strange...
SO was he marryed to a man??
I am confused did they die?
Comment by BlackLily: Feb 4, 2008 8:08 am
yeah they died. that was sad! Grate poem though!
Comment by tyrantCobain: Feb 4, 2008 9:49 am
Very Sad. A downer kinda....but the voting goes up. Great one!
Comment by Poison: Feb 4, 2008 11:38 am
So sad.
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 4, 2008 3:43 pm
yes sad, but really good, I like it!!
Comment by romantichomicide: Feb 4, 2008 3:45 pm
I predicted she woul commit suicide and kill her baby. that was an excellent poem
Comment by PrayForMe: Feb 4, 2008 5:32 pm
That is heartbreaking...But it's an amazing poem. Smiley
Comment by Syrinx: Feb 4, 2008 5:55 pm
Aw... sad. It kind of reminds me of the book Beloved. Good poem though. Vote up.
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 4, 2008 10:19 pm
this is a really good poem.. its sad that they had to die though
Comment by KabrieloftheFallen: Feb 5, 2008 11:52 am
very sad. but i liked it. it was amazing. voting up on this one.
Comment by RobcNky: Feb 5, 2008 4:49 pm
Brilliant poem
Comment by footprints: Feb 5, 2008 9:21 pm
This is brimming with emotion. You have a very captivating way of telling the story and the smooth flow also makes the length of the poem seem shorter. Great write.
Comment by shirotora: Feb 6, 2008 2:04 am
aquaforever: yeah, sorry I probably didnt make that clear enough, she was married to the man beating her child, and yes, they both died in the end.
Comment by sassicat: Feb 6, 2008 11:13 am
Great poem, very sad.
Comment by Beckizzle454: Mar 7, 2008 8:28 am
WOW this is amazing...but at the same time it's very sad.
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