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the dreadful outcome

It was 10pm when mom and dad left..
They didn't answer our calls,
for they were identifying him.
They came back at 2AM
When I heard them dreadful words,
My heart stopped beating.
I fell to the cold earth onto my knees,
My mind went blank; for i was empty.
I felt deaf; their lips were moving so softly
"He Didn't Make It"
Frozen.Flashbacks.Images.
It isn't real; It Can't Be Real
It's just a joke, Right?
No. Reality steps in.
Was it an accident?
Sometimes I get so angry
Looking for answers.
Last words, last breaths;
did anyone try to help him?
The world spinning too fast;
Making it impossible to get up
Insane. I Can't take it any longer.
I Need you back
Jason I Miss You.
Rest In Peace

by xangelchildxx
posted on 06/13/2007

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Comment by deeplyinlove2005: Jun 13, 2007 9:38 am
wow...very emotional...great poem though.
Comment by darksideofme: Jun 13, 2007 9:42 am
Its a good poem. I can sort of relate. People in my familly just keep dying. People around me just keep dying. I've learned to live with it because I can visit them in my dreams.
Comment by darknessgirl: Jun 13, 2007 9:45 am
I agree with deeplyinlove...very emotional...and it is just wow! ...Great poem..I love it!
Comment by luvonlylasts4evr: Jun 13, 2007 9:46 am
Nobody In my family has died for years...but I can still feel your pain...Great poem...Smiley
Comment by xangelchildxx: Jun 13, 2007 9:56 am
It was my brother, he was in an accident.


thankyou for all the comments
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