love it<3

Great setting you have painted. Such presence of air and light. It has me smiling.

Thanks,

Oldman

Whoa... This one's good. Keep it up.

whoa wow speechless beautiful is all i can think of... luv3 it <333

And a beautiful poem this is

It's true as well... Man has overdone its decorating.

hmm..i have no clue what we are doing around this world, but i kno something we all are doing..we are all breathing and living..awesome poem!

i agree with crazyape! be good! nice poem though

awesome song!

im pretty sure only assholes say men cant cry. nice poem.

aww thats nice..I know they love you 2!

love you jay!

Ashley

aww thats nice..I know they love you 2!

love you jay!

Ashley

wowo you suck bad!!!!!!!!!!!

wow, i am just like that with my mother, exept i could care less about her.
i know how you feel. <33

ara? nevermind....great poem and sorry that happened to you.

okaii...wow....
it rhyms =))
hehe..no im kiddin...its good poem.
--vero

okaii...wow....
it rhyms =))
hehe..no im kiddin...its good poem.
--vero

ara? nevermind....great poem and sorry that happened to you.

wow this isn't gay wow i like this poem alot wow its........wow all i can say is holy crap! this is wow
...............speechless..........

Blargh.
Amazing.
So in tune with my feelings.
I like it.
Keep on trucking.

Ouch, that's really well written! And I could picture the whole thing. Lol not that i'd want you to get stabbed but your imagery is great

haha i like this

your annoying you are not perfect you are soooooo weird especailly not amitting to who you are. and i think your a bitch i know im one too ^_^ but i don't like you and your just stupid. duce!!!

your annoying you are not perfect you are soooooo weird especailly not amitting to who you are. and i think your a bitch i know im one too ^_^ but i don't like you and your just stupid. duce!!!

you know i wish you would talk to me i made to many misteks in my life and i am so not even helping myself at all and now you won't evn be my friend or talk to me... that is just sad.. you know just because i am broken does not mean you ccann not trust me but hey.. your choice soo you do what you like k have a good life and you keep writing to has become a part of your life and when people are amazed or shocked or have felt anything of it.. it only means that you are not alone ok and they're are plenty of people on this site who are helpful and willing to be there and be your friends so never give up on yourself..
no matter what k.. Good luck

Good poem!

wow, very nice poem, but this looks like a broken heart poem to me, nevermind, great poem

amazing. i loved it nicely done. good imagery nice word choice

nice

cool

Nice , but a little short for me ....Bwhahaha

Nice , but a little short for me ....Bwhahaha

wow.. um odd style but something made me keep reading. it was emotional and wow... wow... ummm.. wow...

intense!

wow.

........!..!.....!..!...?

wow.. um odd style but something made me keep reading. it was emotional and wow... wow... ummm.. wow...

intense!

wow.

........!..!.....!..!...?

wow.. um odd style but something made me keep reading. it was emotional and wow... wow... ummm.. wow...

intense!

wow.

........!..!.....!..!...?

Last line.
"I need someone who knows how "to" love."



Great poem...Keep writing... I can relate to this poem right now...

Last line.
"I need someone who knows how "to" love."



Great poem...Keep writing... I can relate to this poem right now...

..........wow?......im guessing your still bored?...~katrina.

..........wow?......im guessing your still bored?...~katrina.

Oh my gosh, I hope this isn't true. One of my best friends tried to do this and the thought of somebody resorting to that breaks my heart. If you ever need to talk, I'm here. Beautiful poem, great job.

Oh wow,Really good.
Is this the begining?
Just the smallest bit confusing,I'd have more befor that.
But hell,the thought is really grate.

You took your coat off and stood in the rain
You were always crazy like that
I watched from my window
Always felt I was outside looking in on you
You were always the mysterious one with dark eyes and careless hair
You were fashionably sensitive, but too cool to care
Then you stood in my doorway, with nothing to say
Besides some comment on the weather
Well in case you failed to notice, in case you failed to see
This is my heart bleeding before you, this is me down on my knees
These foolish games are tearing me apart
Your thoughtless words are breaking my heart
You're breaking my heart

...Hmm...This saddens me, I have to say...It's really good, very-well written, you know? hmm *thinking*
(This probably isn't a good suggestion) but...uhm..."My Quiet Battle"..? maybe haha (feels like a dork) anyways I'm sure you'll have better luck

I feel you as the smoke
Blows in my face.
You are there

I love that! I can almost feel the smoke of the ones gone blowing in my face. The poem as a whole is simply sad yet beautiful. Great job!

awhh, this is lovely.
i hope your relationship with your brother improves,
and with a sister like you im sure he'll have the
inspiration to prosper.

great piece. :]

wow, you've relly fallen pretty hard for someone. awesome poem

I like the poem.

keep strong *hugs*

After about 20 or 30 heartbreaks you harden and become the breaker.
Nothing like an ice cold hearth to chill the blood flow.

After about 20 or 30 heartbreaks you harden and become the breaker.
Nothing like an ice cold hearth to chill the blood flow.

*am thinking ...thinking...thinking* wow...I'll get back to you on this...*knows I am not much help right at the moment* lol :/

*am thinking ...thinking...thinking* wow...I'll get back to you on this...*knows I am not much help right at the moment* lol :/

The beginning of this poem was very creative and then somewhere in the middle it just became a rant.

The hurt and anger in this is very clear and I'm sorry for what you must be going through.


For what it's worth, I really liked the first few stanzas.

very articulate. I like it. it's beautiful.