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She was thirteen...

her dad was a drunk

Her mom was an addict

Her parents kept her

Locked in an attic

Her only friend

was a little toy bear

It was old and worn out

And had patches of hair

She always talked to it

When no one was around

She lays there and hugs it

Not a peep of sound

Until her parents

unlock the door

Some more and more pain

She'll have to endore

A bruise on her leg

A scar on her face

Why would she be

In such a horrible place?

But she grabs her bear

And softly crys

She loves her parents

But they want her to die

She sits in the corner

Quiet but thinking,

"Please God, why is

My life always sinking?"

Such a bad life

For a sad little kid

She'd get beaten and beaten

For anything she did

Then one night

Her mom came home high

And the poor child was beaten

As hours went by

Then her mom suddenly

Grabbed for a blade

It was sharp and pointy

One that she made

She thrusted the blade

Right in her chest,

"You deserve to die

You worthless piece of crap!"

The mom walked out

Leaving the girl slowly dying

She grabbed her bear

And again started crying

Police showed up

At the small little house

Then quickly barged in

Everything quiet as a mouse

One officer slowly

Opened a door

To find the little girl

Lying dead on the floor

It must have been bad

To go through so much harm

But at least she died

With her best friend in her arms...









A child dies every day from child abuse.

by Poison
posted on 03/02/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Mar 2, 2008 3:55 pm
Aww.. Such a sad poem! Very very meaningful though! *tears in eyes*
Comment by GurlNoelle428: Mar 2, 2008 4:10 pm
awwww...
thats sad..
Comment by lost_girl15: Mar 2, 2008 4:17 pm
aww thats so sad made me want to cry... *tear*
Comment by FreeFalling: Mar 2, 2008 5:28 pm
This is so sad. Child abuse in any form is horrible.
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 2, 2008 6:14 pm
wow very good this poem is good wow this really touches me because i was abused tear jerker
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 2, 2008 6:18 pm
and the bear part it makes me want to cry because half the time the closes friend i have is my teddy bear. i called her mimzy. when ever i cry or feel lonely i hold her and i hold her tight when i sleep.
i know i sound crazy saying that but i don't care it is only the truth and knowing you; you probly understand. you are a great friend!
Comment by lifesucks: May 5, 2008 11:21 am
this is one of the best peoms that i have ever read. i really like it a lot. i just had a friend that was killed by her mom so it means a lot.
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Mar 3, 2008 8:28 am
*tears* omg that is so sad... its got all my hair standing on end... god dammit if i had gotten my hands on those parents
Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 3, 2008 8:29 am
great poem...very very deep...hope ur friend is doing okay....
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 3, 2008 9:42 am
omg..im still crying.that is really really sad.agree with afireinyoureyes. i would hurt them so bad.
Comment by SinnerIndeed: Mar 3, 2008 10:53 am
That is so touching hun... Anyone capable of abuse is less than a person and is fair game. This poem makes me feel violent..
Comment by bloodyhands13: Mar 3, 2008 11:59 am
wow! thats really sad my best friend was abuse and it drove her to commit suicide thats really sad poem but i think you did a really good job getting the enmotion out. good job>
Comment by forevergone1790: Mar 3, 2008 12:39 pm
i agree with crazyforcodymylove: this was a real tear jerker and makes me want to cry just thinking about it! very good and amazing poem!!
Comment by ShatteredDeepWithin: Mar 3, 2008 12:57 pm
I absolutely love this poem! I can't undersatnd why anyone would ever want to hurt a child!! I just recently signed up but ive read most of ur poems and i just have to say that u have a great talent for writing!!
Comment by cryingblackblood: Mar 3, 2008 1:24 pm
amazing, i hope it isn't true. But in a way it is true, for all abuse victims ho have died. But, as i said, atleast she died with her bestfriend
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 3, 2008 3:07 pm
amazing. thats all i can say
Comment by lost_girl15: Mar 4, 2008 9:34 am
no kids should have to go though that. i know when i read this i really really wanted to cry . i dont understand how any parents would do this to any child.
i posted a commet on here before but i wanted to do another one...
Comment by HeLovesMeNot: Mar 4, 2008 7:31 pm
awwwwwwwww i love it but its so depressing Sad face but i love it all the same Smiley
Comment by aqua4ever: Mar 4, 2008 8:41 pm
ive read this on myspace before.
Comment by xxilovetohatetoloveyouxx: Mar 5, 2008 7:43 pm
WAAAA so so sad my friend printed this out for me and i read it in history and started crying my eyes out and everyone turned around...embarrassing!
Comment by DarkLucifer: Mar 6, 2008 2:59 am
Poor the girl..Both of them doesn't fit to be her parents.If they know they don't like kids what for they born 1?...

Your Poem Are Great!!
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Mar 6, 2008 8:28 am
this was very sad! but all together even though it was it was very good
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 7, 2008 7:39 am
this is GREAT marvelous
just amazing and awesome
a very very good act!!!!!!
Comment by SmotherMe: Mar 7, 2008 2:05 pm
I love this poem, I remember reading it somewhere before and I cried so much.
Comment by pinklove15a: Mar 10, 2008 9:25 am
That is so sad but the again kind of sweet in the end
Comment by CassidyEarly: Mar 10, 2008 1:49 pm
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Comment by SaLaDs: Mar 15, 2008 4:14 am
awwwwwwww this is soo sad i cried! i feel soo srry for this girl if people r gonna do tht to their child they shudnt b parents they shud b locked up imagine tht a bloody girl killed because apparently she is a piece of crap!!!!!! its sooo sad!
Comment by linandbet: Apr 18, 2008 9:10 am
this is so sad...it really touches home here too...thanks for putting it up
Comment by lifesucks: May 7, 2008 10:50 am
that is one of teh saddest poems that i have ever read
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