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Shattered Remains

I sit here in the dark and stare,
At the shattered remains of my heart.
Broken and crushed too many times,
These pieces will always be apart.
I have tried my very hardest,
To be strong and not break down,
But theres nothing to hold onto,
So I tumble to the ground.
There is no fight left in me,
There is no reason to try,
I am weak and I am pathetic,
When I break down and cry.
Close your eyes for a moment,
So I can put on a smile,
So I can swallow down my painful screams,
So I can look happy for a while.
I will hide this pain from you,
And you will never see,
In a box beside my bed,
Are the shattered remains of me.

by GothicRomance
posted on 08/20/2009

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Comment by GothicRomance: Sep 1, 2009 2:18 pm
Sean, you CAN right like this. you're better than me LOL.
thanks for the comments ;D
Comment by Aspire2: Aug 20, 2009 9:38 pm
i like this. you say that you can't write well but i like this.. its pretty in a dark sense.. it may not feel like your best but i liked it..
Comment by Heartbroken120: Aug 20, 2009 10:12 pm
Wow. i loved this!! You said you can't write?!! Well don't say that ever again because you are a amazing writer!! Loved the poem.
Comment by Acheron: Aug 20, 2009 11:06 pm
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS JUST FUCKING AMAZING
I MEAN LIKE JUST WOW I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Aug 20, 2009 11:18 pm
this is really good Really emotional and sorrowful. I love it though.
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Aug 21, 2009 9:32 pm
HOLY SHIT! WTF ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT LOSING TALENT FOR WRITING? YOU ARE THE SHIT! Sticking tongue out
Comment by krips420: Aug 24, 2009 9:25 pm
no doubt pretty good
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