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Shattered

With every beat it screams
With every word we share it beats your name
Longing for you just to claim it

I stare at the stars and see you in them,
I see you in the crowds; can hear your voice calling me,
I feel your lips on mine, like the sweetest wine

I see now it has always been clear
This pain was something I always feared
You have silenced the screams with just one squeeze

Comforting you through my own pain
Wanting nothing more then for it to rain
And to wash away my pain this day

But I will smile through this day
I will carry on through this pain
And lock another chain,

Shattered is what I am,
And shattered is what I will remain
Untill i am complete again

by Acheron
posted on 06/15/2009

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Comment by CrystalHeart: Jun 16, 2009 6:13 pm
This is such a great poem I LOVED IT^^
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Jun 21, 2009 2:40 am
Wow!! that is sooo wounderful, and from as many comments you got i can see you are quite talented.. Love the poem, keep it up..*smiles*
Comment by ElectricNight047: Jun 30, 2009 2:04 pm
Wow. Everyone vote up!
Comment by ElectricNight047: Jun 30, 2009 2:04 pm
Wow! Everyone vote up!
Comment by EnigmaX: Jun 30, 2009 3:42 pm
Yea i like this one. im a new member and this is my fav so far. keep going with it man. this is your style and do what brought you to the dance.
Comment by MyNAMEisBUBBLEICIOUS: Jun 28, 2009 9:56 pm
i love the emotions in this poem its overwhelming
Comment by MoonViolet: Jun 28, 2009 7:56 pm
So much emotions in it.I love it.
Comment by MoonViolet: Jun 28, 2009 7:55 pm
I love it!
Comment by CallumNorman: Jun 16, 2009 10:22 am
got my vote Smiley
Comment by jeffing: Jul 9, 2009 4:49 pm
fantastic!
Comment by MegLeigh: Jun 20, 2009 11:03 am
Excellent.:]
Comment by lexxie2323: Sep 1, 2009 11:01 pm
i am crazy about this poem, it really says alot, i've felt this way, u've collected it and put it in words, i thought it was impossible. awesome job
Comment by trueblessings: Jun 26, 2009 10:48 am
i like it... nice job. Smiley it's so sad though... Sad face well, again, great job.
Comment by xenki: Jun 25, 2009 6:51 pm
love it!

sounds like an emo. .

*thumbs up

Smiley
Comment by FoolishDestruction: Jun 15, 2009 5:41 am
this is truely a great poem you seem etremely talented i love this
Comment by outsidelookingin2: Jun 29, 2009 10:16 pm
your going to make me cry
Comment by Heartbroken120: Jun 15, 2009 2:21 am
WOW!! this is amazimg!
*votes up*
Comment by harley: Jun 15, 2009 2:29 am
Sean, I...
I don't know what to say...
great poem tho Smiley
Comment by MoonViolet: Jun 15, 2009 6:19 am
This is very good!Keep up the good work!Smiley
Comment by Acheron: Jun 15, 2009 8:01 am
thank you all for reading
Comment by ForeverSearching: Jun 15, 2009 10:44 am
Wow!!
Amazing!
This is just wonderful.
So very deep.
*voting up*
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Jun 15, 2009 11:31 am
Aww that is really sad... no one deserves a broken heart...
Comment by AngelShadow: Jun 15, 2009 6:41 pm
This is really good! Like WOW
Comment by GothicRomance: Jun 15, 2009 7:14 pm
another amazing poem!
I'm not suprised, since its coming from an amazing writer.
beautifully sad, and very deep.
I love it so much!
Comment by solonely: Jun 15, 2009 7:43 pm
wow this is a very great poem a bit depressing but I love it
Comment by LoVePoPpEr: Jun 15, 2009 7:51 pm
wow I'm speechless It is amazingzing
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Jun 15, 2009 8:39 pm
i don't know why-but this gave me CHILLS. its so lovely. it shows how much you truly care and what you feel like-with and without your love and i just think its thoughtful and beautifully expressed. :]
nice write, bub. :]
Comment by LostInDarkness: Jun 17, 2009 6:39 am
Awwww Sean this REALLY good! I love the wording but the story is a little sad. Don't worry you will become compleate again and be happy.
Comment by poemlover94: Jun 18, 2009 12:02 pm
i liked it Smiley
Comment by lance: Jun 19, 2009 10:51 am
it lovely it made me think
Comment by Acheron: Jun 19, 2009 11:48 am
think about what lance?
Comment by AlienKiley: Jun 19, 2009 6:03 pm
I likey Open smile
Comment by Shane616: Jun 24, 2009 12:16 pm
Such an emotional poem , looove this Smiley
Comment by Perpetual: Jul 1, 2009 1:24 am
daaaaaang...
thats like all i can say..
...there are no words...
Comment by NoFlogging: Jul 2, 2009 5:44 pm
Nice
Comment by BlackRose: Jul 2, 2009 9:28 pm
nice
Comment by nothingisimpossible: Jul 3, 2009 3:53 am
Woooow!!
Great poem my friend. I loved it a looot.. It is awesome poem which is full of emotions. You are great as you usually do. Keep writing my friend and i am here for you if you need any help. good luck Acheron.
Comment by watsmyproblem: Jul 3, 2009 5:32 am
immense
brilliant
well done
Comment by NOangelsLEFT: Jul 12, 2009 10:01 am
Beautiful
Comment by kingOVDAwest: Jul 12, 2009 8:23 pm
amzing
Comment by prettyspl: Jul 24, 2009 10:20 pm
"Shattered is what I am,
And shattered is what I will remain,
Until I am complete again."

Beautiful ~ This obviously was my fave lines ... : )
Comment by doshy: Aug 10, 2009 10:23 am
Deep & emotional ..
know the feeling of shatterness!
keep it up, got my vote!
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