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mommy always used to say,
everything will turn out right,
mommy always told me,
he'll never take me away,
mommy always was there,
to tuck me in at night,
what happened to thoughs days,
mommy please tell me,
that everything is going to turn out alright,
why daddy chasing me,
all around the house,
mommy please come and save me,
from daddy and myself,
even after daddy hurt,
i tend to hurt myself,
mommy my razor,
is my only friend,
the one i can,
always let in,
my tell me everything is going to turn out for the best,
mommy please dont let daddy when,
dont let them send me away,
mommy tell them all i'm going to be okay,
someone please come save me,
from everything i do wrong,
for i'm just one of the girls,
where life just isnt so blessed,
someone please come save me,
and maybe help me out,
for it seems i due for another beating,
and i cant get out by myself,
someone call my mommy,
and tell her i'm okay,
tell that i love her,
and i'll think about her,
each and every day,
for tonight when midnight comes,
i'm going to hurt myself,
for no one can save me,
if i cant even save myself.

by juicey145
posted on 01/25/2008

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Comment by Poison: Jan 25, 2008 7:49 am
Awww.
Comment by solonely: Jan 25, 2008 8:20 am
I've been there but it gets better edventually
Comment by Mangekyo: Jan 25, 2008 8:27 am
Beautiful work.*sniffle*
I love this a whole lot.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 25, 2008 8:40 am
very good poem
Comment by cryingblackblood: Jan 25, 2008 9:55 am
this poem is so beautiful i almost cried
Comment by romantichomicide: Jan 25, 2008 10:18 am
Seems your experiencing chronic pain in your life.Physical and emotional pain playing a role in your life.Self destruction,a loss, and someone causing harm and hurt twards you, also seems present.I am always here to talk with you if you'd like to.However your writting material expresses great emotional stress. The writing description involves you in the pain. This poem is touching and contains strong feelings. Good work you've created.
Comment by lost4evr: Jan 25, 2008 11:03 am
nice poem!
Comment by lost4evr: Jan 25, 2008 11:04 am
nice poem!
Comment by lost4evr: Jan 25, 2008 11:04 am
nice poem!
Comment by hateme: Jan 25, 2008 12:04 pm
cool poem, i really like it!
Comment by d3ad1ns1de13: Jan 25, 2008 2:55 pm
aww. ive never had to go through exactly that but i know what you mean when u need saving. im here to talk if you want. by the way i love your poem.
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