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Regret

I used to feel I was alone
My life was very rough
Surrounded by friends who loved me
It was never good enough

She was always there for me
Through every breakdown of mine
Comforting, caring, giving a damn
And I thought that she was fine

Internally she struggled immensely
Trying to be perfect
Refusing food with bloody wrists
Her pain she didn't reflect

She broke one day like fragile glass
Shattered inside and out
I didn't see until too late
Too consumed with my own doubt

by tealtear
posted on 07/10/2009

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Comment by Irishandproud7: Jul 10, 2009 9:01 pm
good work, man.
Comment by jjxx1992: Jul 10, 2009 5:11 pm
wow this is really good. dont ever say you dont think ur up to the sites standards cuz this is better than some of my shit. NICE WORK!!!
Comment by AngelShadow: Jul 10, 2009 2:22 pm
AMAZINg I love it insprational! BUt so sad I could feel the emotion in every LINE AMAZING! KEEP WRITTING
*voting up*
Comment by PenandPaper: Jul 13, 2009 9:09 pm
whoa. so...emotional. good job.
Comment by ForeverSearching: Jul 14, 2009 8:38 pm
hey, dont blame yourself.
Chances are, it wouldnt have changed at all.
We all have to learn.

I love the way you wrote it.
You didnt make it all sorrowful and well, the average 'my fault' poem.

Its really beautiful and I think its gonna stick in my mind for a long while.

Another great one!
Keep it up!
Comment by tealtear: Aug 9, 2009 6:47 pm
Thanks guys, your comments mean the world to me. Smiley
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