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Reflections Of The Past
When i see her face
When i look into her eyes
I sense the disgrace
Remember all of those obvious lies
Her presence reflects the past
Mirrors how i felt
My expressions change so fast
Reincarnating the guilt
Bringing back the memories
Trapping me inside
Leaving behind the remedies
Quickly i subside
November 4th, 2009
Cody Potter
by Loveformusicandpoetry1790
posted on 11/05/2009
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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 5, 2009 10:40 am
Hmmmm...Comment by mybeloved: Nov 5, 2009 5:58 pm
i like this. really nice.Comment by JamesR: Nov 6, 2009 7:20 pm
Eh. It's ok. Rhyming is too forced...try making it longer and abit looser, would bring out the emotion in the poem abit better. Eg;
When I see her face,
Look deep into her eyes,
I sence the disgrace
Remember those obvious lies
Still, a good poem none-the-less