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Rabbit Hole

some will never know...
how deep I can love
how loyal I am
how dark my heart is

some will not care
they will just pass me
and they will never see

The pain in my soul
The anger I wear

On the jagged edge of the world
I am in my own realm

Some will never know
Those who thought they knew
Left me a long time ago

Standing there
Alone...
My smile was lost
Wondering how to fix these
wounds I have ensnared

The crow sings of darkness
some will never know
Some don't want to....

They will never know
I'm on the verge of jumping
into the rabbit hole...

by SarinaBear
posted on 09/14/2009

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Comment by SarinaBear: Sep 26, 2009 1:00 am
For anyone reading my work, I would appreciate some real critiques. How does it make you feel? what do you sense? what do you see... something other than the general comment so you can get points to write your own work. Thanks.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Sep 14, 2009 10:17 pm
that.was.epic. and its just very sad. whatevr u do, dont jump. it aint worth it. i swear.
Comment by LostInMotion: Sep 16, 2009 2:44 pm
that is very good..... dont go down the rabit hole, i know from experience, its hard to get out
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