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Pockets

Just another fool,
Used more than a tool,
Sheltering under the rain
With hands buried,
In bottomless pockets,
Deciding if life is sane.

He tries to laugh about it,
Lie there's a glimmer,
But then nothings good to come
And those hands dig deeper.

by Bourne
posted on 05/18/2008

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Comment by BrokenLove: Jun 20, 2008 9:52 pm
great
Comment by CrimsonRain: May 25, 2008 7:44 pm
fabulous C:
Comment by XxXBleedingRosexXx: May 18, 2008 8:28 am
I like the...hmm like the metaphors..

It's really good

5/5...
Liike the first liine caught my attention...really good
Comment by NiceGuysLoveBetter: Jun 17, 2008 3:51 pm
great
Comment by oceanreverie: May 18, 2008 10:12 am
wow this is very good, great metaphors, great flow. this poem really captivates my mind and makes me think. i especially love the last stanza, it's very powerful. great job!
Comment by drkromance: May 18, 2008 11:58 am
Wow.. this is a great poem. Great job!
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: May 18, 2008 7:12 pm
thats really good (:
Comment by danfinner: May 19, 2008 1:29 pm
Well done.
Comment by TheForgottenChapter: May 21, 2008 9:31 am
i like it
Comment by broken3heart3: May 22, 2008 8:48 pm
makes sense.... in it's own little way
Comment by DeVdoll343: May 26, 2008 8:59 pm
In my eyes... you are a genius. this poem is indescribable.
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