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Please Stop Dad

PLEASE STOP DAD:

I smell the whiskey on your breath.
And you beg for me to put your temper to the test.
You slap me around, and call me names.
Dad, I'm sick of playing these games.

One day it's going to end up getting worse.
It hurts me. How you yell and curse.
Stop it, before it's too late.
Dad, this is not your fate.

You used to care.
You used to be there.
Now you've gone away.
Dad, please stop today.

Bruises and hits.
Temperamental fits.
All is causing me pain.
Dad, stop yelling. I'm not to blame.

You're drinking away what’s left of you.
It's hurting me, and you're hurting me, too.
I've cried. I've begged. What more can I do?
Dad, I've tried to help. And I've tried to still love you.

It's hard, when I'm only neglected.
When all I ever wanted was to be accepted.
I know I'm not perfect, but look at you now.
Dad, you've got to stop this somehow.

You've beaten me down once more.
My heart's broken, and I'm lying on the floor.
How much more of this can I take?
Dad, please. Give me a break.

You brought me into this life.
And you cause me all this strife.
But are you going to take me out of this world, too?
Dad, stop before that comes true.

by allstarkid
posted on 06/12/2008

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Comment by greybutterfly: Jun 12, 2008 6:03 pm
sad one too Sad face but a good poem
Comment by paulina13: Jun 12, 2008 6:21 pm
i feel the same way a lot. my dad is an alcoholic and it is really frustrating. good job though keep up the good work
Comment by vampireheart: Jun 13, 2008 5:54 am
aww that's so sad :[
but a very good poem!
Comment by Nickole: Jun 13, 2008 10:28 am
aww thats sad reminds me of my dad but it was a excellent poem
Comment by oceanreverie: Jun 13, 2008 6:11 pm
wow that is just..amazing. im speechless. i really hope things get better for you
Comment by drkromance: Jun 13, 2008 7:29 pm
Wow... very deep and so sad.. filled with so much pain. Great poem though.
Comment by paulina13: Jun 26, 2008 6:25 pm
wow i can so relate good job
Comment by savannahskye: Jul 9, 2008 7:23 pm
dat so sad but its amazing and if you ever need someone to talk to am here
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