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Ode to a Fallen Hero

Every gunshot honoring your life,
Every teardrop that I see,
Brings me back to the better times,
Of the fuck up that was me.

If I could only be like you,
Even for a day,
Would I have the nuts to risk my guts,
Or would I run away?

You told me I could be anyone I wanted to be,
The day that you gave us that talk,
'This community has what it needs to be strong'
You watched as I relearnt to walk.

I think you are a hero,
Unlike some of those in my school,
But no man who won't leave another behind,
Can be described as a 'f**king fool'.

Into the flames of hell you vanished,
Gone without a trace,
Saviour of the forsaken ones,
Abandoned by the rest of our race.

I watched you fighting,
For more lives then your own,
You were worth so much more then them all,

Then you vanished into ashes,
Fire and smoke,
Became just another name on their wall.

by beautifuldisaster
posted on 10/25/2009

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Comment by prettyspl: Oct 25, 2009 10:47 pm
Another Hero gone to us .. thank you for writing such a beautiful poem to honor him with.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Oct 26, 2009 4:04 pm
"If I could only be like you,
Even for a day,
Would I have the nuts to risk my guts,
Or would I run away?"

I like the way that sounds. It's a nice fit of words. It's also something I think of a lot when I remember certain people... I'll stop now before I ramble.
Great poem.
Comment by grunty: Oct 26, 2009 6:06 pm
You told me I could be anyone I wanted to be,
The day that you gave us that talk,
'This community has what it needs to be strong'
You watched as I relearnt to walk.

It makes me sad every time I hear you mention your accident.

Then you vanished into ashes,
Fire and smoke,
Became just another name on their wall.

That is a strong and somber finish.
Beautiful work.
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 26, 2009 10:01 pm
Aw, man. This is purely beautiful.
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 27, 2009 2:30 pm
Into the flames of hell you vanished,
Gone without a trace,
Saviour of the forsaken ones,
Abandoned by the rest of our race.

Thats good.. really good.

And the end was heartbreaking, but the poem was beautiful and well done.
And by your words, this person is FAR from just another name.
Comment by Telemachus: Oct 27, 2009 7:00 pm
Where do they go? It's the one question I can't answer as an atheist. There are people I think about every single day - but they are gone - just gone.

I guess that's all there is.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Oct 28, 2009 4:26 am
I do believe this would please anyone it was written for. Except perhaps Tina Turner...diva.

Great stuff.

(Tele - i didn't realize there was only one question atheists couldn't answer...can you tell me next weeks lottery numbers? Please.)
Comment by mightymouse: Nov 1, 2009 8:19 pm
I can't express the sadness you feel when you read this poem....

I'm so sorry....
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