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No opposition...

As I lay me down to sleep…

I pray death you lay upon me…

I can’t eat…

I can’t sleep..

all because of you..

Killing me silently…

Was your master plan all along…

Take me now…

And never look back…

I can’t stop you…

My heart is in pain…

For ever more…

Take me away from all that care…

Knock me off my feet…

And take a bow…

Because you just became the object that can take me down…

For I have now fallen victom to you...

I am the object of your eye...

The end of me.

by AngelIndeed
posted on 04/30/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 30, 2008 11:24 am
it's ok...
Comment by SinnerIndeed: Apr 30, 2008 11:21 am
That is a beautiful poem. And I really hope that you're not feeling like this.
Comment by Breathexxforxxme: Apr 30, 2008 11:23 am
you know... the way the you write and just the emotions and how you feel and how you are so able to put them into your poetry is just so amazing!!! you... are just.. an.. amazing writer!! i love your poetry so much i think no scratch that i know that you are such an amazing poet... and an amazing friend at that too...
Comment by emogothjen: Apr 30, 2008 1:01 pm
you put alot into that poem and it really shows, its an amazing poem and you did a great job!
Comment by RayneSong: May 2, 2008 10:17 am
i love how you speak to death as if it were a person . . . poetry in motion! Open smile
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