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nature that surrounds
Nature around him
flowers blossoming
vegetating by the second
woodland surrounding him
and animals eating
seeds from his
bare palm
like he's
in an enclosure
all animals acting so tame
but sadly...
he feels the same
by NicholasScott
posted on 02/27/2008
flowers blossoming
vegetating by the second
woodland surrounding him
and animals eating
seeds from his
bare palm
like he's
in an enclosure
all animals acting so tame
but sadly...
he feels the same
by NicholasScott
posted on 02/27/2008
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Comment by thoughtsandsecrets: Feb 27, 2008 11:24 am
nice...that was a cool poem....it made me feel like i'm floating or lifting ...lolComment by Poison: Feb 27, 2008 11:39 am
Very good. 
Comment by America1: Feb 27, 2008 6:00 pm
Nice, but did u make this when u weren't @ school? Comment by Snoman: Feb 29, 2008 10:07 am
nick i'm not gonna lie... reposting for more comments usually gets u less... in this case you pulled out a flat even lol 
it's ok
i think that you're trying too hard with some of the words u use...
vegetating just doens't sound like you...
be urself when you write and maybe i'll comment to make it 5
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 4, 2008 9:41 am
good poem.Comment by kitten546: Aug 5, 2008 11:51 am
go on at least once!!!>.<