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My Son...

How do you love a person
Who never got to be,
Or try again to see a face
You never got to see?
How do you mourn the death of one
Who never got to live,
When there's nothing to feel good about
And nothing to forgive?

I love you, my son.
You're a person of the wind,
Free to be the memory
Of all that might have been.

I love you, my son,
My companion of the night,
Wandering through my lonely hours,
Beautiful and bright.

What does it mean to die before
You ever can be born,
To live the lovely night of life
And never see the dawn?

Ah! My litle boy,
You lived like anyone!
Life's a burst of joy and pain,
And then, like yours, it's done.

I love you, my precious son,
Just as if you'd lived for years.
No more, no less, I think of you,
The angel of my tears.

by angeleyes7686
posted on 04/22/2008

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Comment by KookiesLilSweetheart: Apr 24, 2008 11:13 am
what a great peom! i am sorry about your son. Sad face i have a son myself and he is my world and i dont want to imagine life without him. i know God will take good care of him and is there for you. Good Luck and God Bless!! Smiley
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 23, 2008 8:52 am
Wow!! very beautiful poem!
Comment by kayla: Apr 22, 2008 2:07 am
Really beautiful poem. very well writtenSmiley
Comment by Lisa8: Apr 22, 2008 4:22 am
this breaks my heart. it hurts so much to love someone you never got to finish loving....beautifully expressed...
one day you can! Revelation 21:4, John 5:28,29
Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 22, 2008 4:54 am
omg this is sooo sad
I am so sorry that happened to you
Your son is in a better place and may God bless you
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Apr 22, 2008 5:48 am
Sad face wow... i'm sorry... life just isn't fair sometimes... its never fun to lose one we love... it always hurts.. just think of it this way... he will never be hurt again... He will be there to watch over his beloved mother he never knew but loved just as well
Comment by scarredemotions17: Apr 22, 2008 5:53 am
that was a sad poem but greatly written. iknow people hate hearing this but i can share your pain something like that happened to me to. sorry.
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 22, 2008 6:25 am
I know how that is well kinda....I lost my Kyra..But not while i was pregnant with her...Her first birthday is June 3rd....Im here for you darlin if you need someone.
Comment by missingmom: Apr 22, 2008 6:47 am
Beautiful poem! I'm sorry for your loss, may God heal your heart. Smiley
Comment by poetoflove: Apr 22, 2008 7:24 am
aaaw how sad but touching! i'm so sorry! but if it makes you feel better you have a beautiful talent!
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Apr 22, 2008 7:27 am
i agree with everyone above! i'm so sorry! i know you must really be hurting but know he's always going to be with you! closer than you know... very very beautiful lines!
Comment by beautifulxhjfxdisaster: Apr 22, 2008 8:22 am
oh my gosh. this is amazing. i am so sorry for your loss...please, if you ever want to talk, message me!
=]]
Comment by Cloudular: Apr 22, 2008 9:28 am
This poem is amazing. I couldn't possibly imagine your saddness that came with this. The word usage really pulled everything together. Great poem! : )
Comment by 18girl101: Apr 22, 2008 10:34 am
That poem is amazing, i bet you put a lot of time into it
Comment by EdensApple91: Apr 22, 2008 12:16 pm
this is a beautiful poem
im sorry for your loss, hopefully the bastard that caused the loss will die painfully Smiley

anyway, this is an amazing poem. i dont know what else to say...im speechless Smiley
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 22, 2008 2:59 pm
i must agreee with edenapple91 and every one else....this is really an amazing piece....best wishes from me to you...Smiley
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: Apr 22, 2008 3:59 pm
wow.
So amazing.
I love it.
Awesome job.
I hope you're feeling ok (:
Comment by angeleyes7686: Apr 22, 2008 11:40 pm
Thanks everyone I really appreciate all the comments and the concern. It has been a few years so I have had time to heal, but yes it still does hurt when I see a little boy about his age running around and playing. Thank you all!
Comment by poemsarebliss: Apr 23, 2008 2:42 am
it's just plain astounding nd a lot of other things i can't think of rite now!!!..amazing!!!...
Comment by purpleice: Apr 25, 2008 5:43 am
nice one
Comment by Monika1: Apr 25, 2008 7:30 am
Great poem
Comment by Brighenti: Apr 25, 2008 2:03 pm
It's beautiful, very well written
Comment by Korn: Apr 25, 2008 3:22 pm
I can relate to the pain you adore. I lost a set of twins a year ago. I always take comfort in knowing my babies are in heaven with my friends and family members which have passed.God loved them best ! Have faith in knowing your son is with you always, I'll keep you in pray.
Comment by Alomentis: Apr 26, 2008 3:19 am
Wonderful wonderful poem! One of the best I've ever read I do believe. Thank you for sharing it, you have an amazing talent.

"The Lord takes many away, even in infancy, that they may escape the envy of man, and the sorrows and evils of this present world; they were too pure, too lovely, to live on earth; therefore, if rightly considered, instead of mourning we have reason to rejoice as they are delivered from evil, and we shall soon have them again"
Comment by AllAlone: Apr 26, 2008 7:39 pm
I can relate to the poem. Its really sad but, extremely well written. Something like that happened to me. But, its a very well written poem. I liked it a lot.
Comment by sytycdlike3rinn: Apr 27, 2008 5:59 pm
You write so well, and i'm sorry about your son, i can tell how much you loved him.
Comment by asdfyz: Apr 28, 2008 6:31 am
im sorry that that happened. Very good poem though. It is strange how such tragic things become so beautiful.
Comment by Alomentis: Apr 29, 2008 12:54 am
The Lord always has a way of turning tragedies into a blessing of some kind. Your Son, though he never took a breath, has blessed the lives of many, and will continue to bless many on both sides of the veil.
Comment by EmoPoetry: Apr 29, 2008 7:32 pm
the love is very powerful. It's very obvious.
Comment by drkromance: Apr 30, 2008 12:47 pm
That brought me to tears. The poem is amazing but I'm so very sorry about your son. Someone in my family lost her son and I know how difficult it must be after trying to help her.
Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 30, 2008 4:44 pm
omg! this is so touching. it's a wonderful poem, the kid missed out on havin a great mom who loved him. his father should be ashamed of what he did. wicked awesome poem and i'm sorry for ur loss. it must be hard missing someone u never got the chance to se and it must be way harder cuz he was ur kid and u never got to hold him. u seem pretty strong and u wrote this poem wonderfully.
Comment by DarkAngel692008: May 2, 2008 10:30 am
AWWW i like this poem great job im sorry by the waySad face
Comment by paulina13: May 7, 2008 6:38 pm
sad poem, but i love it
Comment by allstarkid: Jun 12, 2008 8:13 am
this is really sad. I'm sorry about your son.
Comment by ashuhhland: Jul 3, 2008 1:07 am
o wow
i love this poem
its so sad, my i got really teary eyed.
i cant even see the screen now.
this is amazing
im so sorry
i hope u left the guy who beat you, he deserves to rot.
once again great work
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