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my pain...

You can't see my pain,
all my cries are in vain,
you can't see my fears,
in these endless falling tears...

I'm living this suffering life,
in my heands I'm holding a knife,
I can see my arms full of scars,
and my soul is scattered like the stars...

You don't catch me when I fall,
just can leave me in this darken hall,
you hurt me with words, not with fists,
for every word I have a scar on my wrists...

Do you know what you're doing to me?
Are you able to change or even just to see?
I have no moire blood to bleed,
but my biggest wish's just to leave...

Hear my final call,
see me when I fall,
notice that you broke my heart,
for I am finally falling apart...

oOSilentSoulOo

(My favourite song for now is Blood to bleed by Rise Against)

by oOSilentSoulOo
posted on 11/29/2007

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Comment by PrayForMe: Nov 29, 2007 9:12 am
Awsesome!,
Very well written
Vote up Smiley
Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Nov 29, 2007 2:05 pm
dang!! good poem...i can relate fully! great job
Comment by imagine: Nov 29, 2007 10:29 pm
I like the ending.
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Nov 30, 2007 4:01 am
Well done. Vote up.
Comment by scarredemotions17: Nov 30, 2007 6:07 am
i really like this it was well written and u have an act for poetry. i guess this site is meant for people who truly know how to express them self in good poetry.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 30, 2007 8:02 am
that was really cool.
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