Poem of Quotes Members
Please log in below, or sign up.



Forgot Password?
Subscribe to a premium membership! Premium membership
Search for poetry anywhere! PoemofQuotes SE

My Concrete Savior.

Around me her strong cool arms were curled,
As she sheltered me,
Protected me from the harsh cruel world,
I leaned back into her chest and let out a sigh,
Closed my eyes and willed myself not to cry,

It had been along time since we were together,
I just wanted this moment to last forever,
I whispered to my mum all my thoughts,
Those that were happy, sad, depressing or violent,
She just took them all with a smile and remained calm and silent,

I felt like she was listening to what I had to say,
And that comforting thought blew all my burdens away,
I looked up at the purple streaked setting sky,
And knew that the time had come for me to say goodbye,

I stood up and turned to my mother with a wave,
And slowly walked away from her beautiful grave,
But before I left I turned and read,
The epitaph engraved on the stone head,
“Loved mother and wife and daughter with a smile so sweet”
I know that she will be forever loved my mother, the angel made of concrete.

by shirotora
posted on 01/05/2008

Vote: Vote upVote down
Comments: 15
Click here to send this poem to a friend

Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 5, 2008 8:45 am
Oh my gosh! This is VERY good. goodness i dont have words for how good it is i was reallly impressed! Very unique! I will most deffinatly vote up and i will add you. You have talent!
Comment by mindless: Jan 5, 2008 10:30 am
seriously impressive. i like it alot.
Comment by footprints: Jan 5, 2008 10:46 am
This has a smooth flow - a captivating story making me want to read further. Great write
Comment by bleedingheart: Jan 5, 2008 11:28 am
im speachless great poem
Comment by unknown: Jan 5, 2008 5:29 pm
great job.
Comment by PrayForMe: Jan 5, 2008 5:56 pm
This poem is so beautiful, such capturing words.
Vote up!. Smiley
Comment by shyhallow: Jan 6, 2008 4:08 am
Almost brought me to tears. My mom passed away recently, and I miss her dearly.

I never knew a poem could stir up so much emotion.

Thankyou for posting this, it is a masterpiece.
Comment by invu2: Jan 6, 2008 6:58 am
Wow. That was something I did not expect. Nice job. Keep up the good work!
Comment by thegurlat410: Jan 6, 2008 8:18 pm
this breaks my heart in a beautiful way, good job.
Comment by SadGirl96: Jan 6, 2008 11:32 pm
I love this poem!.
It's so pretty. Vote up!
Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 7, 2008 1:46 am
i love it.
keep it up.
Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 7, 2008 10:36 pm
wow.
i just love how it ends.
it totalys like blows your mind.
i didnt exspect that at all.
very nice poem!
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 14, 2008 10:49 am
Great poem! IT is SO amazing!
Comment by Beckizzle454: Jan 14, 2008 8:01 pm
oh
wowi like it alot
very deep and brillant
Comment by tobeloved: Jan 19, 2008 12:37 pm
very deep, it's amazing i love it!keep it up
Add a comment: