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Moving On

I'm now walking away
From all the things that hurt
From all that you say
From this sad, bitter concert

I'm now packing my things
Sorting out all I want
Letting go of my belongings
Releasing the things that haunt

All the years of patiently waiting
For dreams to become true
Years of useless self hating
You'll be okay, no matter what I do

I've struggled so long now
Trying to make it all work
Living in principal of Tao
Strange in my own little quirk

You fall on your knees and beg me to stay
And it all seems better for once
I'm ready to go, there's nothing to say
After such misfortune before this bunce

It's funny how life works and doesn't
When it's bad, it all is
All the things that were and wasn't
Now it's okay, and I really want this

Don't cry, it's contagious
I've worked through the notions
It may seem outrageous
But there's no room for emotions

So, now I'm ready to leave
To make everything better
Sorry, no time to grieve
But keep in touch, write me a letter

by RayneSong
posted on 06/29/2008

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Comment by RayneSong: Jul 1, 2008 3:22 am
I wrote this one because I'm shipping out with the army, and a lot of people are having a hard time understanding it. Thanks for the good comments! Open smile
Comment by posh007: Jul 1, 2008 3:11 am
This poem is a powerful body of work...helps empower the lost... I look forward to reading more!!!
Comment by timewornsoul: Jun 30, 2008 5:21 pm
I like this one a lot...Its never easy letting go of someone and when you do you have to be like that or youll just go right back. Very nice piece. Excellent job.
Comment by jacobc: Jul 1, 2008 10:37 am
Wow. I can understand the meaning, very nice!
Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jun 29, 2008 9:36 pm
I LIKE IT REAL GOOD
Comment by lostinpoetry: Jun 29, 2008 10:02 pm
It's so hard sometimes. fine work.
Comment by fade: Jun 29, 2008 11:08 pm
I like it a lot. Especially how the rhymes seemed natural and not forced. Good rhyming and scheme is hard to find sometimes. Great!
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