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Missing (Song)

<Part 1>

[Prelude]
I can't see you
You're not next to me
I can't see you
You're not next to me

You're not here with me
Not here and so far away

I can't see you
You're not next to me
I cannot see you
'Cause you're not next to me

You're not here with me
Not here and so very far away

So far away...
So far...

<Part 2>

[Introduction]

[1st Verse]
NOOO!!!
I will not break
This suffering is illusion
I will not break
No, not this time
No, I know

[Pre-chorus]
That I'm without you
For awhile now
I'm without you
For awhile now

[Chorus]
I can't see you
You're not next to me
I can't see you
You're not next to me!

[Post-chorus]
So alone! I'm so alone!
Not next to me! I'm so alone!

[2nd Verse]
Such a pity it has come to this
I thought I was stronger than this

[3rd Verse]
The veins have bled
So stupid!
The heart bleeds still
What's wrong with me?

[Lead Interlude]

[Instrumental Bridge]

[Spoken Word Passage]
Another night, I’ll lay awake,
My pillow soaking in my tears.
I’ll drown in every tear I make
And wish for my cold fate to near.
Tonight I’ll whinge in privacy
Like every sleepless night before.
Only listener here is me,
I struggle to find the core.

[Refrain]

[4th Verse]
Slowly, I'm losing my mind
Thought I could cope, but I'm spiraling down
Spiraling down

[Instrumental Bridge]

[Pre-solo]

[Bass Solo]

[Lead Solo]

[Harmonization]

[5th Verse]
I'm fighting for
Something to hold on to

[Pre-chorus]
Someone who isn't you
Someone who's closer
I'm without you
For awhile now

[Chorus]
I can't see you
You're not next to me
I can't see you
You're not next to me!

[Post-chorus]
So alone! I'm so alone!
Not next to me! I'm so alone!

[Climax]
I long for your embrace
Warming me to my very core
...long for your embrace
Warming me to my very core

[Coda]

[Spoken Word Outro]

I love you...
But you're so far away...
And I don't think I can take this anymore...
Goodbye...

by PoemWritingGuy
posted on 04/15/2009

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Comment by Perpetual: Apr 15, 2009 6:43 am
woah....dude there are like no words to discribe this. its too good. ;) you got some major talent!!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Apr 15, 2009 7:22 am
Thank you. Smiley I put all my time and emotions into this. My bandmates and friends of the band love it.
Comment by mcmil: Apr 15, 2009 8:28 am
i love it mate
is it mainly screamed?
Comment by Writeitout: Apr 15, 2009 7:26 pm
That's swao! I love it... I want to watch you preform this soooo badly!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Apr 16, 2009 11:18 pm
Thanks. Open smile
Comment by alostsoul: Jun 6, 2009 8:31 pm
I can feel it, I can hear it too. I could picture the perfect video for this. I closed my eyes and 2 tears rained down my cheeks, I swear, this is beautifully dark but cold and remorseful. Amazingly Beautiful
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