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Love Hates Me

Love hates me and so it makes me shake
And it finds its pleasure in watching me break
So take me away from all of this pain
To a warm, happy place where I can feel sane
But only in my imagination such a place does exist
Beyond the trepidation and amongst all the mist
But reality just sees me shaking again
At the cold hands of a love that won’t start, so can’t end
When all I want is a friend, a warm hand to hold
A loving heart that’s been cut from the mould
Of honesty to promise me that she will never leave
And it won’t be just another lie I’ll believe
But a truth, a devotion, an answered prayer
And I’ll be amazed to see that someone does care
But they’re not there really and I’m still alone
An obscure thing – unnoticed, unknown
Broken and battered – my heart is a mess
And no one can care less as it’s ripped from my chest

by MechanicalAnimal
posted on 11/04/2007

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Comment by kayla: Nov 4, 2007 8:20 am
AwwSad face this is really well written, I love itSmiley
Comment by missingmom: Nov 4, 2007 11:37 am
We care, although I know that's not what you need. There is some special woman out there somewhere that is feeling the same way you do, hopefully, you will find each other soon. I think this is my favorite poem I have read of yours. I sorry they are still sad poems, hope you will be able to write happy love poems to some lucky girl again in the very near future! Smiley
Comment by PrayForMe: Nov 4, 2007 12:40 pm
Great Poem!, as always
Vote up Smiley
Comment by fAiTHsTeArs41: Nov 4, 2007 12:47 pm
....wooow.....thiiis is good..

welll DUUUH...all your poems are good thumbs up!
Comment by Eric G: Nov 4, 2007 12:52 pm
Good poem bro, but yeah: "Smile" - its good for you! Open smileOpen smile..
Comment by unknown: Nov 5, 2007 7:35 am
really good.
Comment by moonlightbroken: Nov 5, 2007 9:18 am
nice

i love it
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 5, 2007 1:46 pm
i love it, too!
Comment by WithoutWings: Nov 6, 2007 8:24 pm
nicely done, great poem!
Comment by Poison: Nov 8, 2007 10:31 am
i care.. i may not act like it right now but i do hun and you know it
Comment by chikle: Nov 9, 2007 1:07 pm
OMG! its so sad and its exactly how i feel bout this guy =[
Comment by venus: Nov 10, 2007 5:08 pm
i love this poem
Comment by kitten546: Nov 15, 2007 4:48 pm
really sad but its a great poem i hope u can find a loyal heart!!!!Sad face
Comment by princessjb100: Nov 25, 2007 9:18 pm
great poem
Comment by MisGoo: Jan 2, 2008 8:49 pm
So well written..
Comment by solonely: Jan 17, 2008 5:49 pm
there aren't words to descibe how I feel but I think you
wrote them...this isn't just
a poem this is a work of beautiful art
Comment by cravingsoul: Feb 1, 2008 10:42 pm
amazing poem...loved it
Comment by rayne482: Jan 25, 2009 1:27 pm
Wow. Full of emotion, like all of poetry, but more prominent in this one. Just wonderfully written.
Comment by icantbewithouther: Apr 4, 2009 4:01 pm
amazing
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