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Lonely

People all around me
Friends and family
Always there
But not quite here

Everyday I'm surrounded by people
But it's not always that simple
I may lose myself in the crowd
But it's not always that loud

When they leave
And I'm alone
A sigh i heave
'Cause I'm alone

The loneliness creeps onto me
Like the shadow of the night
And I'm afraid to see
That I'm alone again tonight

Though it only seems present when I'm alone
It's actually there evry time of day
Whether in a crowd or alone i lay

How do i get over this despair?
How do i stop feeling lonely?
I don't want this life of solitaire
I just want some company

Why do i feel this?
I Have you here
But why does my heart ache
When you are so near?
I know,
I need more than just an hour a day
More than just a 'hello' or a 'hey'

You are here but not really here
You don't listen you only hear
Please listen, Please see
Please know that it's you I need

This loneliness is killing me
Isn't it killing you too?
All I need is a conversation
With who? Why of course you!

by danielle
posted on 01/22/2008

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Comment by missingmom: Jan 22, 2008 7:10 am
I love it! It's so true, you can be so alone, even when there is someone else in the room with you., Sometimes I think too, that it is worse than the loneliness of really being alone by yourself. Very good poem. Smiley
Comment by Poison: Jan 22, 2008 12:34 pm
I LOVE IT!!! and very true.
Comment by tobeloved: Jan 22, 2008 3:42 pm
i love it!, it's very true,
keep up the good workSmiley
Comment by andypandy114: Jan 22, 2008 4:42 pm
prettyful . : )
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 23, 2008 10:48 am
love it! makes so much sense. keep it up
Comment by Bleedingcactus: Jan 23, 2008 11:13 am
You can be in a sea of people and yet feel completely alone. Your not alone, never alone. I have lost twice those so close. It hurts, they say time will heal, but what time affords you is a way to live with it. Nicely written and keep the faith.
Comment by XangelicXshadowsX: Jan 24, 2008 3:19 pm
i love this! i can realate to this poem...very nice ^-^
Comment by Seleni: Jan 25, 2008 10:40 pm
The feeling of pain for being lonely i know it. you feel abandoned and forgotten even if it isnt true, you just feel it like that. But, checke for errors before you submit your poem, it will make it easier for the reader to understand what oyu are trying to say I'm sorry if i offend you somehow but i like to critizise other poeple work to make it better. i dont believe in trashing a poem just telling what you could fix to make it better.
Comment by danielle: Jan 29, 2008 3:49 am
it's ok..
i appreciate the constructive critisizm (i think i spelt it wrongly).. anyway..
i'll try and make sure my poems are typo free b4 submitting..
thx..
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Apr 7, 2008 3:54 pm
empty and alone I feel the pain you've shown.
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