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lonely

so lonely so sad
so angery so mad
i wanna cry
but i have to keep a dry eye
alone with my knees to my chest
Put my head on my knees to rest
just sitting here writting a poem
wasting my breath
wasting time
I feel so lonely so lost
are these feelings false
I don't know and yet don't care
being lonely just isn't fair

by loveforeverlivelonger
posted on 06/16/2008

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Comment by darksideofme: Jun 19, 2008 6:18 pm
This poem reminds me of how I feel when I write a poem and I think it's a waste of my time.
Comment by asdfyz: Jun 19, 2008 3:55 pm
It is sad but powerful. Great writing. At first the rhyming sounds forced, but it works out in the end. great job with that poem. It takes a strong person to write about that.

The loneliness goes away eventually. There is someone for everyone. =]
Comment by Breathexxforxxme: Jun 18, 2008 6:44 pm
i agree it does say alot and if i did this i feel so so bad you know if ever you need somebody to yalk to you can always talk to me
i am always here for you..Smiley
very good
Comment by EmoBabyGurL: Jun 16, 2008 11:40 pm
i like it. its short but nice.
Comment by gunsandroses666: Jun 16, 2008 9:45 pm
my style of writting good flow!
Comment by vero15: Jun 18, 2008 2:53 pm
yupp..shortt but sayss alott.
lovee it (=
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