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just one

i'm one-just one
in a world of millions
it's one thought-only one
among the countless billions
who am i to be different
what's the value of life anyway?
i'm so tired of the pain
don't want to go through it day after day
what's the value of life anyway?
i'm so close to finding out
i'm so tired of the fucking fights
the useless drama
the sleepless nights
FUCK IT ALL TO HELL!
i'm just one-right? just another one...
then why do i feel the burden of so many?
what's the value of this one?
tears scalding rivers burning down my face
fuack it, i've shut down again
all emotions gone without a trace
except for one-just one
hopelessness clings to words they say
it's some sick-twisted game they like to play
to give me hope and then to take it away
what's the value of a life anyway?
i'm spiraling downward into darkness
mouth shut but there's so much to say
oh well, it's not like they'd listen
can't make it through, i'm dying a little more everyday
what's the value of life anyway?

by moonlightbroken
posted on 01/10/2008

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Comment by Poison: Jan 10, 2008 12:09 pm
Ohhh my dear...i know how you feel aswell...
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 10, 2008 12:23 pm
great poem...i feel ya...
Comment by sajinn: Jan 10, 2008 4:13 pm
thats hard and so is life
i feel ya too
Comment by jendocious: Jan 10, 2008 6:31 pm
This is a wonderful poem. I can really relate to it.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 10, 2008 6:52 pm
This is really good poem, Would be better without cussing.
Comment by shadowofasoul: Jan 10, 2008 7:17 pm
i agree with aqua4ever but sometimes cussing is what it takes to get your point acrossed
i can realy relate to this...
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 14, 2008 9:41 am
It is a great poem. Obviously the cussing is to get to the point which is this is how she feels. So anyways, great poem. Open smile
Comment by christi823: Jan 17, 2008 9:34 am
Great poem!
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Comment by tobeloved: Jan 19, 2008 1:24 pm
great poemSmiley
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