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It just took one

It just took one
Second of her life
Now she craves fun
And leaves behind the strife

It just took one
Look into those eyes
He had her hooked
And cut all previous ties

It just took one
Word from him
She was in a fog
Her head started to spin

It just took one
Small mistake
Her world started to spin out of control
Now it’s more than she can take

It just took one
Of his sweet little looks
To make her give up
Now she’s shutting all the books

It just took one
Cold word from him
To make her upset
But she didn’t give in

It just took one
Party at the bar
Looking at her
She’s regressed pretty far

It just took one
Little drink
She was losing it
And on the brink
Emotional meltdown

It just took one
Second of her life
It just took that moment
When she almost died

It just took one
Moment to put into perspective
All the tears she cried

It just took one
Moment of fear
To make her see
She doesn’t need him near

It just took one
Tear of rage
To make her relies
Her whole life is a stage

It just took one
Rusty little razor
To end the show
She’s dead and gone
And who will ever know?

by DarkestAngle
posted on 09/21/2009

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Comment by kiraralee77: Sep 21, 2009 5:49 pm
sad... very sad... very well told, story of a girl..
nice write.
Comment by kamugi92: Sep 21, 2009 6:52 pm
really sad and really good awsome job. Keep it up .
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Sep 22, 2009 2:10 pm
HOLY SH*T!!! *mind just--blown*

whoa...like wow
This is REALLY...uhm...Interesting


AWESOME RISTY!
amazing o.o
scary too in a way O.o
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