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It's like she Died

abandoned
thats how I feel
like a child left
alone

She just left me
For the second time in my life
only this time, for good
It feels like she is dead

She said goodbye and good luck
and then left
deleting all traces of herself
leaving me with nothing

She must hate me
and I don't know what I've done
I just want to break down and cry
because my friend just died

She is as good as dead
and just like death
there is nothing I can do

by darksideofme
posted on 06/20/2008

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Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Jun 22, 2008 8:28 am
oh in that case......
i am still here for you because you are my great friend...
Comment by darksideofme: Jun 21, 2008 7:24 pm
I'm just going to clear up something up right now. because I feel bad that I think I may be misleading people. My Girlfriend did not break up with me. My ex-Girlfriend from this site just left and completely deleted her profile and said goodbye. but she was still a good friend to me and I was unexplainably sad. I had to write to get rid of my sadness..... sorry just wanted to clear that up.
Comment by BrokenLove: Jun 20, 2008 9:44 pm
But if she hated you, she wouldn't have said "good luck".
If you considered her a friend, then she couldn't have possibly hate you.

Yeah, I hate it when friendships end.

But good poem.
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Jun 21, 2008 11:58 am
Wow i am sorry that is sad. well darksideofme the best thing to do is be strong and move along.... because life is to short just to stay with a broken heart....
I believe you can find someone better who can care for you i am here for you and you know it me and my pokes lol well i hope you feel better soon but remember what i said okay, because i care about you and want you to be happy just think there are a million people in the world well with an educated guess over a million but that certain someone is sitting in there window looking at the stars and wondering where you are.....
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 20, 2008 2:43 pm
heartbreaking. sorry dude. stay strong, be tough, hang in there,
Comment by Freewriter91: Jun 21, 2008 12:30 pm
Stay strong as the others said i know it is hard to move on but you have to and yes they will stay with you for a long time but in the end it will all turn out fine i promise you just have to believe that everything will be okay <3
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