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Inhale Exhale
I am inhaling all of this smoke
Exhaling the rest’ soon I will croak
One cigarette equals 1 min taken away
Shortening my life so I won’t have to stay
When will it be tomorrow or later today?
When will you see I only want to die?
I know that it hurts but please don’t cry
I only want to feel good when living this life
Maybe it is better than just picking up a knife
Better for me to smoke my lungs out
Tired of feeling lost' trashed' and strung out
So I inhale… slowly exhale letting it all out
I am only here waiting for my last breath
I can’t disappear so I will wait til’ my death
The poisons inside of them I addictively crave
And I realize that I am digging my own grave
But yet and still I will continue to inhale
My lungs only fill of these poisons’ soon I will bail
by foreverendeavor1790
posted on 04/30/2008
Exhaling the rest’ soon I will croak
One cigarette equals 1 min taken away
Shortening my life so I won’t have to stay
When will it be tomorrow or later today?
When will you see I only want to die?
I know that it hurts but please don’t cry
I only want to feel good when living this life
Maybe it is better than just picking up a knife
Better for me to smoke my lungs out
Tired of feeling lost' trashed' and strung out
So I inhale… slowly exhale letting it all out
I am only here waiting for my last breath
I can’t disappear so I will wait til’ my death
The poisons inside of them I addictively crave
And I realize that I am digging my own grave
But yet and still I will continue to inhale
My lungs only fill of these poisons’ soon I will bail
by foreverendeavor1790
posted on 04/30/2008
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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 30, 2008 9:03 am
Wow...this is...a really great poem.Comment by Breathexxforxxme: Apr 30, 2008 9:15 am
this is a very good poem!!Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Apr 30, 2008 12:36 pm
Babe you promised.....why? babe i thought you were going to try and stop for me....I don't understand...........Comment by emogothjen: Apr 30, 2008 12:40 pm
great poem and stoppin is harder than starting and takes a while. it is very freakin hard to do. but i get it though.Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Apr 30, 2008 3:28 pm
yes it is hard to stop i agree with ^
but....idk....but if i see you i can't be around cigrett smoke....
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 30, 2008 8:54 pm
hey tiff i apologize but you see it ain't so much that i am adicted but it is more likely because i am sick and tired of being told who i should and shouldn't be and you know i really don'tt plan on smoking my whole life.. i've been thinking hopfully just a year or 2 if i have to get a shrink to help me quit at that time than i will... but babe just please understand that i really only want people to like me for who i truely am on the inside and not judge me or tell me what i should and shouldn't do for the stupid choices i make ok... please babe i am so much more of a better person than that...Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: May 1, 2008 3:57 pm
Babe i am not judging you.... i am sorry if it sounds like i am. I am sorry..
....but you know you are right you are who you are and people shouldn't try and change you....the main reason for me wanting you to stop smoking is not only for my benifit....well i don't want to be sick because the health problems i already have and not that i can't breathe around it but i don't want anything to happen to the one i love............and i care about you so so much i am trying to protect you.......
I just want to love someone that isn't also like my parents are you aren't mt gosh you have more love then they ever will.... And you care......and i know you won't raise your to me..(what i was tryng to say i know you wouldn't hit me) I love you and i just want what is best for you.... I love you baby..
Comment by bloodyrose: May 7, 2008 10:23 am
sad...too sad...but knwo how it feels