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If She Could Love Me

I see her, sobbing, without sound,
Her tears, they sear my soul,
I wish I could console her, now,
But he would not condole.

Although he wants her, she alone,
He acts not so contentedly,
Her heart constantly torn and thrown,
As I just stand there, idly.

I tell myself, she is not mine,
I should not interfere,
For he will get her back, in time,
Hope fallen on deaf ears.

I'm tired of this pain I feel,
She tells me, softly unassured,
Enamered by a love so real,
And yet, I can't choke out a word.

I am, but now, a constant struggle,
Wondering what next to do,
I let her see, in looks so subtle,
How much for her I'd truely do.

I'd lay the lion with the lamb,
Our love would make the sun more dim,
With eyes that care and understand,
If she could love me, more than him...

by eochaid
posted on 10/24/2007

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Comment by footprints: Oct 25, 2007 2:48 am
Life does deal out strange hands! Contending with the possibility of a love that is so clear for you but may never be is a bitter pill to swallow. You are portrayed this really well in this poem. Voting up!
Comment by footprints: Oct 25, 2007 2:49 am
Terrific rhyming and the whole things flows really naturally btw.
Comment by footprints: Oct 25, 2007 2:49 am
Terrific rhyming and the whole thing flows really naturally btw.
Comment by LilDeadPrincess: Oct 25, 2007 6:40 pm
this is an awesome poem i wish i could write like this
i used to be able to <3 more power to u <3
Comment by LilDeadPrincess: Oct 25, 2007 6:47 pm
this is an awesome poem i wish i could write like this
i used to be able to <3 more power to u <3
Comment by PrayForMe: Oct 25, 2007 8:16 pm
Wow!
I felt that!
Vote up! : D
Comment by sabathepirateram: Oct 30, 2007 3:25 pm
AMAZING!!!!!
Vote up!!
Comment by wwwdotcom: Mar 14, 2008 8:12 pm
wow..wow...vote up
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