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If I End It All Tonight

If I end it all tonight,
Will anyone care?
Will people come to my funeral,
Or use it as a day to skip school?
If I end it all tonight,
Will I be missed?
If I end it all tonight,
How much will I hurt you?
Or will you even care?
If I end It all tonight,
Can I trust what,
You'll do with my body?
If I end it all tonight,
Will you follow suite?
If I end it all tonight,
I've decided,
No one will care,
It doesnt matter what happens.
If I end it all tonight,
Who Knows I just might.

by bleedingheart
posted on 01/02/2008

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Comment by FreeFalling: Jan 2, 2008 1:54 pm
I can really relate to this. This almost everything I would think when I was contemplating suicide. But if you do people will miss you, even if you don't think they will. The people you least expect are the ones who care the most. That was always what held me back. I hope you find something worth trying to going for. Good poem, keep writing.
Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Jan 2, 2008 2:10 pm
i can relate...good poem! i love it
Comment by MisGoo: Jan 2, 2008 11:33 pm
nice work Smiley
Comment by StripesAreANoGo: Jan 3, 2008 6:06 pm
I relate to this poem so much. Sometimes you just wonder what will happen. I am sure everyone has felt that before. Really nice job.
Comment by bryttboo: Jan 4, 2008 3:25 pm
omg.
i wrote a poem
almost exactly like this because of this kid named
brad see he broke my heart
and i went in total
depression in got into poerty like crazy
ill put some on here
Comment by andypandy114: Jan 4, 2008 9:49 pm
i like it=]
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