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I don't want to see you this way

I don’t like what you’re doing,
Even if I don’t know why,
Why you’re doing it in the first place,
But I know what happens,
When you get high,
And you get drunk,
You never hit me,
You don’t even yell,
But still it scares me.

You’ve always been busy,
With things to do,
But when you drink tequila,
And you’ve had a long smoke,
You start to play around,
And mouth off with dirty words,
You’re always playing around,
but You make mom shake her head.

It scares me how you do this,
How you’re attitude changes,
Though everyone else’s having fun,
I just don’t want you to get hurt,
I don’t like to see you doing it,
With a pipe in one hand,
And a lighter in the other,
I don’t like it at all.

I love you, More than anything,
And I want you to be okay,
But I’m not sure if you will,
Since you’ve been doing it so long,
But I want you to stop,
And put down the pot,
And start being a dad.

by LynnDoll
posted on 02/26/2008

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Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Feb 26, 2008 9:13 pm
wow Yep i have been there hun i know how you feel my biological dad never did pot or any thing he just smoked and drank but he did hit me way to many times. but give him a while talk to him maybe just maybe he will change. read this poem to him. great poem.
Comment by Poison: Feb 27, 2008 6:47 am
Very Good poem!
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Feb 27, 2008 9:51 am
I never had to think like that but I like it anyways. It's great.
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 27, 2008 8:58 pm
babe first of all if he aint hitting you when he do this.. then dont trip on him.. he's doing it for a reason.. because somethings wrong.. pot and drinking make happy even if its just pretend. but this is a good poem.. and maybe you should show it to him
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 3, 2008 11:15 am
awww... you should show it to your dad, he might understand, that you don't like it when he does pot or drinks.
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 13, 2008 3:39 am
very good Smiley
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