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Fragments Of A Dream

Why the fuck must this always happen?
My life like a bird flying free.
Peaceful.
Then violently shot down,
Nowhere to go, dead.
My life shattered to a thousand pieces,
My hope shot all to hell'
My soul fragmented.
My World escaped.
When all I ever wanted to do was be alive again.

by TearRains
posted on 02/02/2008

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Comment by thefadingscene: Feb 2, 2008 9:52 am
Reading this...I feel like you have more to say. It kind of ends abruptly with "My soul fragmented."
Maybe using a simile would let out even more of what you have to say.

But Rod, you have serious talent. You really do. I actually enjoyed reading this. =]

<3 Chana
Comment by cher0017: Feb 2, 2008 9:53 am
at least you were a bird. i never was.
Comment by loveme77: Feb 2, 2008 10:59 am
Very Good. I love the title.
Comment by tearsofrain: Feb 5, 2008 11:29 am
ya know what i thought of, reading this poem?

that stupid expression "kill two birds with one stone"

poor birds.
Comment by TearRains: Feb 11, 2008 2:12 pm
haha jessi sister.... you would think of something like that.... thankfully everything isnt all bad any more. This poem is kinda empty for me now.
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