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Finding Happiness

(verse 1)
Through all the hippocracy
and times of adversity
Still I'm ducking and dodging
To avoid my fallacies
Always striving and trying
to avoid catastrophy
Fighting an unfair world
For what makes me happy

(Chorus)
Finding my happiness
Searching for my dream
But I can't escape the darkness
that haunts me in my sleep
Looking for the piece
thats missing my my heart
Waiting incomplete
Slowly falling apart

(verse 2)
Im slowly dying inside
Patiently waiting for you
Only this smile outside
Hides what still remains untrue
But I will not wish to die
Because my time is not through
Til the day I die, I'll wait
For my dream to come true

(chorus)

by aCrazyApe
posted on 01/25/2008

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Comment by Poison: Jan 25, 2008 11:40 am
Very good.
Comment by forevergone1790: Jan 25, 2008 12:27 pm
I agree.. excellent
Comment by MysticFog: Jan 25, 2008 6:05 pm
Wow...this is really good.
Comment by NicholasScott: Jan 25, 2008 11:15 pm
u suck jorge jk good poemSticking tongue out
Comment by Snoman: Jan 26, 2008 10:02 pm
unh hella good dude!!! i only would say 2 add another verse!!! i like the chorus and u thought it could use work??? i think maybe make it longer cause this would be a pretty short song, but i can see this being sung pretty nicely...

i think actually i'd only change the last line maybe... it depends on how you'd sing it vs how i see it sung.

but yeah hexa good if u ask me bro Smiley
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Feb 14, 2008 2:25 am
Nice song. Smiley
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 14, 2008 11:41 am
me like ALOT..
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 14, 2008 11:42 am
me like ALOT..
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 14, 2008 11:42 am
me like ALOT..
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