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Father' s Everlasting Love


Falling in my pit of darkness
I sit upon the black roses of sadness
Dreaming of days fill with happiness
Only to end with loneliness

For these open eyes wonder why
Looking at life pass by
The hollow eyes begin to fill with crimson tears
As you still don't see my fears

My life start to darken
As my heart become broken
I am trap in shame
For you I blame

Father's everlasting love

The love I hold for you is dying
Why do you keep on trying
Listen to my story
For I do not feel sorry

What wrong with you now
Your smile is upside down
Is it cause I'm taking a stand
Or that you now want to give a hand

My love for you will never last

Copyright ©2007 Donna Maya Cooper



by DeadMoonChild
posted on 02/05/2008

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Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 5, 2008 10:59 am
beutifull. i understand(parts)
voting up
Comment by DeadMoonChild: Feb 5, 2008 11:05 am
Thank You Smiley
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 5, 2008 11:17 am
wow really good, beauiful!
Comment by KabrieloftheFallen: Feb 5, 2008 12:06 pm
absolutely stunning. i completely understand> great job.
Comment by NicholasScott: Feb 5, 2008 7:47 pm
great poem... thx for the commentSmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmileySmiley
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 6, 2008 10:58 am
really great
Comment by jynxl337: Feb 15, 2008 10:57 am
Very very good
Comment by Freewriter91: Feb 19, 2008 12:48 pm
Beautiful poem amazing job
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