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Fake.

My pen bleeds emotion
from a pressured ink ball.
so artificially manufactured
my emotions are nothing at all.

Products of factory,
products of industry,
products of nothing but fake

plastic body parts
no room for the arts.
gone on as long as I can take.

Can I hold my ground?
Will I be swept away,
to lands unknown.

by TheDarkShadow
posted on 10/21/2009

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Comment by Bubbles2mySoda: Oct 22, 2009 4:51 am
This is really, I don't really know how to say it other than simply true. The way you describe your pen is a really strong beginning and it rounds off so neatly. You are amazing.
Comment by LoveMeDead: Oct 23, 2009 5:06 am
This is incredible... I really like your writing... Good job.
Comment by deathmonkey: Nov 20, 2009 2:28 pm
Smiley Good, as usual
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