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don't hurt me

the 'dad' mum loves
iz the man i fear
he hits us all
specially after beers]
we hide away
in our home
praying he wud
leave us alone
he doesn't love us
he just wants her money
he tries to sweet talk her
call her honey
but if she doesn't
have any cash
he hits us all
thrash thrash thrash
i wimper at night
tring to be quiet
so i don't wake him
and cause a riot
i pray one day that
my mum will see
he's no good for her or me
i walk to school
on my own
no adults
no emergency phone
i pass a bridge
were trains go through
i stand on the pipe
and say thanks dad
this is through you
i fall off
can't feel my bones
i see the train
and let out a moan.......


i wake up
it was just a nightmare
but in my doorway
my dads stood there
oh no i knew
i woke him up
i must have let out
a scream
before he hits me
i think
should i follow
my dream .....

by jodieedis
posted on 11/20/2009

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Comment by Kookie3104: Nov 20, 2009 7:35 am
wow i i really like this its simple but deep... it makes my heart want to cry.

i dont think you should follow your dream.
it would be a mistake. and you have so much a head of you.
I hope that this gets better stay strong love.
if you need anything.
hit me up :]
Peace to you from me.

-Shelly-
Comment by Healer: Nov 20, 2009 2:29 pm
hmmm, dang interesting, i used to be hittoo, but you cant think of death here,. its not wsorth ednign yourself.
Comment by NaturalBeauty: Nov 24, 2009 2:16 pm
really sad but truly deep and beautiful
Comment by animeangel: Nov 26, 2009 9:08 am
wow awesome poem
Comment by charlotte897: Dec 1, 2009 2:47 am
wow really strong emotion
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