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Deep Down

I keep telling myself
im better off without you
I keep telling myself
ill get over you
but deep inside I know its not true

I keep crying
but I blame it on my allergies
I keep moping
but I blame it on my tiredness
but deep inside I know its not true

I keep thinking about you
but I blame it on my stupidity
I keep longing for you
but I blame it on my lonleyness
but deep down I know its not true

deep down
I cant get over you
deep down
my heart crys
deep down
I fall
deep down
I die
deep down
..Is where the truth lies

by trapped
posted on 11/14/2007

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Comment by Morticia: Nov 14, 2007 12:46 pm
wow! vote up! its really emotional and easy to relate to!
keep it up!
Comment by tiffany: Nov 14, 2007 1:24 pm
awww this is a good poem good job ryan
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 14, 2007 2:31 pm
that's a good poem.
Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Nov 14, 2007 3:13 pm
i totally understand!! good job!!
Comment by FreeFalling: Nov 14, 2007 5:28 pm
Awsome poem, good job.
Comment by punkprincess: Nov 14, 2007 5:37 pm
aww! i LoVe it!! Smiley
Comment by survivingatleast: Nov 14, 2007 6:00 pm
great poem! =]
Comment by kitten546: Nov 14, 2007 6:41 pm
i really love this it shows how much u love him/her.
Comment by oOSilentSoulOo: Nov 15, 2007 3:16 am
wow... oO good job.. awsome... really...
Comment by BabyGirl320: Nov 16, 2007 10:24 am
WOW really good poem, it gets straight to the point and I could definitly relate. I LOVED IT!!!
Comment by McRluvr: Nov 16, 2007 10:35 am
ya great job i really like it shows how after a tragedy you could call it we kinda go through denial
Comment by friendZdogZ: Nov 24, 2007 8:28 pm
yea, this is awesome!! really wawesome! dDEEP DOWN i love it! lol
Comment by brockendreams: Dec 3, 2007 9:30 am
hey that was good this chick really means a lot to you and its cool to hear that there are still some good guys out there.
Comment by Elizzybeth86: Jan 25, 2008 11:11 am
wonderful. its awesome.
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